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 Sep 14 2009, 07:35 AM
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 (′ ･ω･｀)  Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477  |
well, used all sorts of vector shapes on this actually. no brushes or whatever. anyway.
 http://kapailuj.deviantart.com/art/syndetic-136997385 |
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Sep 14 2009, 04:44 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
This is pretty different and I like it. I like how the colors are solid at the top of the image but are faded on the bottom of it. I dk what else to say because nice job.
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Sep 14 2009, 05:33 PM
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 /人◕‿‿◕人\ Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
That cluster of shapes up at her head, lighten it up.
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Sep 14 2009, 05:53 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
^ What he said. I like it, esp the colours you chose :)
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Sep 14 2009, 09:10 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
QUOTE(Buttsex @ Sep 14 2009, 05:33 PM)  That cluster of shapes up at her head, lighten it up. I agree; The ones over her eyes are just a little bit distracting. But everything else is quite nice. Good job. 
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Sep 15 2009, 12:21 AM
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(′ ･ω･｀) Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
thanks. but, i dont see why i need to lighten it cuz this isnt about her face or eyes.
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Sep 15 2009, 12:25 AM
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oh, how beautiful..
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Sep 15 2009, 12:29 AM
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 f your couch Group: Official Member Posts: 3,089 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,301 |
QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Sep 14 2009, 04:44 PM) This is pretty different and I like it. I like how the colors are solid at the top of the image but are faded on the bottom of it. I dk what else to say because nice job. i like the placement of the shape clusters too. |
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Sep 15 2009, 12:36 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,237 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 648,123 |
I dunno; I guess I get to be different and say I'm not really into it. The colors are cool, but I don't get the idea of the piece. A couple oddly placed circles, but why use circles when you're using predominantly sharp-edged shapes? Why use sharp edges when her curly hair stands out so much?
I understand most of the shape direction, but some of it I don't. They're just...there, almost like I'm looking through a kaleidoscope. The shapes are only in the foreground, none in the background. Her boob distracts me, too. It's only very slightly poking out, almost like a tangent. I'd say either chop it off completely or make it more noticeable. |
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Sep 15 2009, 01:07 AM
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(′ ･ω･｀) Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
this is just abstract art with a girl as a background.
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Sep 15 2009, 01:15 AM
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사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
QUOTE(doughnut @ Sep 14 2009, 10:21 PM) thanks. but, i dont see why i need to lighten it cuz this isnt about her face or eyes. Exactly. The stronger colours in that area draw attention to her face and eyes and distract from the rest of the piece. I'd say your main focus on her body is the middle section, but from looking at the piece, the head stands out more. |
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Sep 15 2009, 01:52 AM
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(′ ･ω･｀) Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
well, what i mean is not the focus should be on the body or head, its supposed to be on the shapes. and yeah, i made it so the head stands out more than the body.
but thanks anyway (: |
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