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Working on a new div
TeamGX
post Sep 7 2009, 04:03 PM
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Give me critics and stuff, this will be a flash div layout.

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HeartOfPandora
post Sep 7 2009, 04:25 PM
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The typography really sucks, and I feel like the friend space is too rigid to match the rest of the layout. Either use rounded corners for everything, or don't use them at all.

Colours are dece though, except maybe the friend space again, it doesn't look like it quite matches the red in the splatters.

Also, I dunno what's with that blue stripe down the middle. You could just make two separate columns of text and they'd divide themselves. Or even if you're going to put images on one side, the columns would still look separate even without a divider.
 
heyo-captain-jac...
post Sep 7 2009, 04:27 PM
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That font you used in the About Me section sucks and should only be used for extremely large text (if ever at all)
 
Maccabee
post Sep 7 2009, 04:39 PM
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Although im inclined to say its cool... It sucks. Just work on text mainly. Like the url part needs to have a thick bold font large text spacing. I just feel like it is like to small. Jut cause there are no bold features.
 
manny-the-dino
post Sep 8 2009, 02:40 PM
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I agree with everyone here but mainly with HeartOfPandora. She pointed out more detailed things you need to work on. I mean the design is pretty cool but just work on the other things. thumbsup.gif
 

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