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 Jul 31 2009, 05:59 PM
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 Senior Member  Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913  |
 Leave me some feedback on what to fix . . appreciate it, Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Jul 31 2009, 08:24 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
I don't get why you included pills and there's something about the background that could be better. Just can't put my finger on it. Maybe it's too dark? Iono. But other than that, it looks gewd.
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Jul 31 2009, 08:30 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,288 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,380 |
The pills are a bit big, and i would darken the mac a little
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Jul 31 2009, 09:05 PM
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 /人◕‿‿◕人\ Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
Either ditch the dock or stick the mac taskbar up top.
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Jul 31 2009, 09:10 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Yeah, get rid of the dock and change up your font. Also, the monitor should have like a shadow to make it seem more realistic and the pills are pretty big. O_O I say resize them some and also darken them and give them some shadows, that is, if you want this to look realistic. :/
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Aug 1 2009, 01:34 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
all the fonts you used inside the computer screen look really really nice together. well, except for the "www.warlab.com" part; that part doesn't blend so much.
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Aug 1 2009, 11:42 AM
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Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
ite thanks alot guys ill make sum changes and post up another version... also people were saying the pills dont match because they scream "white rapper" you guys got any other suggestions on what do put there instead?
Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Aug 1 2009, 12:35 PM
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 I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
QUOTE(deteam @ Aug 1 2009, 11:42 AM)  ite thanks alot guys ill make sum changes and post up another version... also people were saying the pills dont match because they scream "white rapper" you guys got any other suggestions on what do put there instead? Stay Up -1- Subliminal lol @ screaming white rapper. i think anyone who sees pills on a cover at the moment is gonna think of eminem's relapse cover. anyway why did you put the pills there to begin with? i mean whatever you put there kinda depends on the content of the mixtape. if pills have something to do with the music then i don't think there is anything wrong with having them there. |
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Aug 2 2009, 07:50 PM
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 This bitch better work! Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,681 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,095 |
why drawers in the background?? it's just not cohesive to me.
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