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 Jul 20 2009, 10:47 PM
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 i like boobies, yes I do. I like boobies - how 'bout you?  Group: Member Posts: 620 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 662,457  |
So yeah, I got inspired and have been working on this all day, almost nonstop, in between reading / watching Harry Pothead.
Anything in particular you like / dislike / want to see changed? The footer is actually supposed to be shorter, but I forgot to crop it off before I uploaded so ignore that for now. Yes, it's quite a large image, but that's only because it's a prototype and I haven't coded it yet. I'm actually quite nervous to start slicing it for coding, and even more nervous to think that I'm going to try and turn it into a WorPress theme! THERE'S GONNA BE SO MANY DIVS!!! /dies Rabble (aka preview). <3 |
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Jul 20 2009, 10:55 PM
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 poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
I really like it. Makes me want to photoshop
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Jul 20 2009, 11:02 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 268 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,515 |
beautiful! the colors are fantastic!, the image looks strange
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Jul 20 2009, 11:06 PM
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i like boobies, yes I do. I like boobies - how 'bout you? Group: Member Posts: 620 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 662,457 |
Whai thankyou (both)! :D
But which bit looks strange? |
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Jul 20 2009, 11:11 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 268 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,515 |
the CD girl image looks a bit old & outdated
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Jul 20 2009, 11:16 PM
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i like boobies, yes I do. I like boobies - how 'bout you? Group: Member Posts: 620 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 662,457 |
Ummm... I'm goin' oldschool all tha way? :D
I just liked her composition; flow and colours. |
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Jul 20 2009, 11:18 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 268 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,515 |
yeah i do too, the colors again, fantastique!
the entire design has a great flow from the girl & spreads to the actually content, i wonder if you could add some shine to the girl image? like a light hitting her from an angle to make one part of the image glow/shine right now the entire girl image seems to have glow/shine on her |
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Jul 20 2009, 11:22 PM
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i like boobies, yes I do. I like boobies - how 'bout you? Group: Member Posts: 620 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 662,457 |
To be honest I'm not really sure how I'd go about that. I've never worked with an animanga image before, and now that you mention it she does look kind of flat. :x
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Jul 20 2009, 11:27 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 268 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,515 |
although she has that simple mature theme which fits very well with the overall design, the original shine on her does make her pop a little but after viewing her outline, its clear she's not blending in well with the mature design colors,
maybe add some darks or lights around her, i dont' know if paintstrokes will work but a back shadow with a little motion would kill the outline and enhance the glow on her working with anime or manga blows. i've learned that, never used the original image in your picture without altering, inhancing it or something to make it your original, still credit no joke but make it feel like it belongs in that design. |
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Jul 20 2009, 11:40 PM
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i like boobies, yes I do. I like boobies - how 'bout you? Group: Member Posts: 620 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 662,457 |
Ah yeah I see what you mean! She's sort of just... sitting there. I'll see what I can do. :D
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Jul 21 2009, 12:01 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
I like it a lot. It's cute. I'm especially in love with the black and white paisley borders. Nice job!
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Jul 21 2009, 01:30 AM
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i like boobies, yes I do. I like boobies - how 'bout you? Group: Member Posts: 620 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 662,457 |
^ thanks! ^_^ It was a pain getting that border to work, so I'm glad someone other than myself likes it! >.<
@Autmn I added a bit of a soft glow around her to match the text, any better? It's all I could really think to do haha. |
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Jul 21 2009, 01:40 AM
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 \( ﾟ ヮﾟ)/ Group: Member Posts: 60 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 584,750 |
Pretty! Only thing I don't like is that black pattern you're using. It looks okay at the top but in the footer it looks strange to me.
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Jul 21 2009, 01:54 AM
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i like boobies, yes I do. I like boobies - how 'bout you? Group: Member Posts: 620 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 662,457 |
^ I know what you mean. I didn't want to use it again, but I also don't want to put in another new pattern, that would look even more strange... :x
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Jul 21 2009, 02:29 AM
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 ;) Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
I really like the overall design, and the patterns look pretty good too.
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Jul 21 2009, 04:43 AM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Yeah, I agree with lowering opacities on some of the blurs. I want to be able to read "Heart Of".
 The overall design is good though. I also think that the bottom patter is a little strange. Maybe lower it's opacity or change it to a different color?
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Jul 21 2009, 12:46 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
The preview image isn't working for me right now, but I remember seeing it last night and my only problem was with the blue glow around the title. It clashed with the green words.
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Jul 21 2009, 01:51 PM
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 Tick tock, Bill Group: Administrator Posts: 8,764 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 333,948 |
^I agree about the glow (surrounding "heart of").
This is beautifully done, over all. |
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Jul 21 2009, 01:59 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 268 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,515 |
the blue glow does make the overall composition better.
i'm not sure what..oh what if the girls eyes had more brightshine |
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Jul 21 2009, 04:09 PM
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 model type = no appetite Group: Member Posts: 137 Joined: Jul 2009 Member No: 737,182 |
looks really nice, i say. colors look good.
not a big fan of anime though |
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Jul 21 2009, 04:32 PM
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i like boobies, yes I do. I like boobies - how 'bout you? Group: Member Posts: 620 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 662,457 |
Thanks for all your suggestions! I took most, if not all of them, and updated the image. :3
If you're worried about the green titles on the right, they're going to be generated in WP by a very nice plugin that lets me use that font. ^.^ |
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Jul 22 2009, 03:48 AM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
"Pandora" and the headers on the left - the color looks like a sort of dark yellow on my screen, doesn't look so good with the rest of the layout.
The character image looks great. I'd shrink the paisley border behind her a bit, though. I really like the layout overall (: You did a great job. |
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Jul 22 2009, 04:30 AM
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 (′ ･ω･｀) Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
QUOTE(elletricity @ Jul 22 2009, 04:48 PM)  "Pandora" and the headers on the left - the color looks like a sort of dark yellow on my screen, doesn't look so good with the rest of the layout. agreed. also, the glow of "heart of" makes it hard to read. |
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Jul 22 2009, 07:43 AM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,036 Joined: May 2009 Member No: 727,246 |
lovely :)
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