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 Jun 24 2004, 06:09 AM
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 Aww! ^___^  Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645  |
Here's a poem for the guy that understands me, he's dying. I won't tell you any more private things about me. I write my poems based on my feelings, it's how I deal with my feelings. It's really hard for me to let him go.
 Fading Away, by Foolish Heart [Me] You walk in my life Now your fading away Heart beating so fast Tears fill my eyes Take my hand Im here to help I look at you Blurred in confusion Your fading away Hold me tight Heres my heart Forever yours to keep Dont forget I'll follow you I love you so Just for you to know |
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Jun 24 2004, 06:25 AM
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 muted imperfections <3 Group: Official Member Posts: 3,295 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,260 |
aww im sorry to hear about the guy. but awesome poem. nicely written.
p.s: look we have similar screennames.  jackie
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Jun 24 2004, 06:27 AM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
ahh that's cool..en thanks..i dont noe what to do anymore..i'll be on vacation startin tomoroe..en he might die [I HOPE NOT..] before i come back..omg..i am so worried..
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Jun 24 2004, 06:48 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 35 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,644 |
wow...
im so sorry... i really lyke ur poem... it seriously got meeh thinking about how alone i would feel and if the only person [mai boifren] who understood meeh ever left...
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Jun 24 2004, 07:16 AM
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moved to writing.
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Jun 24 2004, 09:08 AM
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 Peace Luv bubbles Group: Member Posts: 580 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,467 |
I got one here. Its actually ment to be a song, but lyrics and poems are the same thing.
You don't know me, but I know you. You can't see me, but I'm watching you. You don't feel me, But I'm holding you in my arms. You can't hear me, but I'm always listening. I'll always be there watching your every step. I'll be your everything when theres nothing left. I'll be your friend, till the very end. And all your words I defend. You don't know me, but I know you. You can't see me, but I'm watching you. You don't feel me, But I'm holding you in my arms. You can't hear me, but I'm always listening. I'll wipe your tears when you cry, I'll comfort u when your scarred, I'll drive away your nightmares at night, I'll even be there when u die. And then you'll know me, like I know you. Then you'll see me, as I see you. Then you'll feel me when I hold you in my arms. Then you'll hear me when I say, I'm your Gaurdian Angel. I wrote it when my grandma died, and I rewrote it when my great uncle died. It makes me feel ok. I also listen to the lyrics to "into the West" It makes things better. |
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Jun 25 2004, 01:48 AM
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 × JeNi × Group: Member Posts: 32 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 23,307 |
both poems are great.. sad too. im sorrie to hear about the guy.. hope you get to see him once more when you come back from vacation.. =]
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Jun 25 2004, 01:59 AM
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 ilikeyouSofreakingmuch. Group: Member Posts: 2,014 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 643 |
Here's a poem I wrote
 I wrote it during C Period .. I got too bored in the class: right now, my heart lays torn apart and bleeding inside, im just crying & dying .. and you know what? there's only one thing i'm needing but guess what? i've given up trying ive given up hope, and fer all i kno youll nevr love me, to you itz jus a joke a joke that wasn't funny the first time around and now wen i cry, der is no sound kuz i've cryed my heart out .. and even tho yer makin me wanna jz die .. ill still love you, no doubt Little stupid poem, but anyways .... haha xP
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Jun 29 2004, 11:00 PM
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 Here's my poem ..i was pretty sad when i wrote it..soo tell me what yah think..------------------------------------------------------------------- Why am I here? Is there a reason, a reason to feel fear? As I sit life wastes away and all I can do is fade away...awayy.. Sometimes I feel like I don't belong mixed thoughts and they all feel wrong Can't i ever just feel right and leave all this behind wthout putting up a fight... Speaking my last words.. I wonder if you can hear.. As tears roll down my face.. All my memories are erased I just wish everything would be fine. But I guess what's yours is mine ______________________________________________________ |
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Jun 30 2004, 03:41 PM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
ooh you guys have great poems..en thanks to all the people that thought mine is nice..
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Jun 30 2004, 03:42 PM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
ohh yeah,,as far as i noe..his still alive right now..i think he's being really strong so that i'll see him when i come back..
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Jun 30 2004, 04:06 PM
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 Got Me? Group: Member Posts: 34 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 26,430 |
I have a song...but it can be a poem I guess
your lovely completely lovely in everyway your sweet completely sweet and everyday I love you I love the way your here for me you there for me when I need you your who I see your trusting completely trusting in all I say your caring you do what you can to get me my way I love you I love the way your here for me your there for me when I need you your who I see when your near me I am breathless when you kiss me I lose all sense of everything your here for me your all I see your everything your everything |
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Jul 4 2004, 11:23 PM
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 weeEee *smack* Group: Member Posts: 46 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,490 |
woa. talented poets! ^^ I hope everything works out for you foolish heart
Anyway, Heres one of mine~>She stumbled as she walked along a wrinkle graced her jaunty brow the heavens fell, cast downward when a hand exposed the path she found She longed for warmth, ensnarled by frost across horizons arms that fled persistance of a heart that weeped to walk the road that so few tread with fleeting eyes that seemed to scream she stood admist the lashing air wispy tendrils masked her face her fingers laced in longing prayer and when she fell, I knew not why her hands perturbed with death had slain freedom came, redemption none and only tears fell free from pain. -Teressa |
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Jul 6 2004, 07:42 AM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
nice poems
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Jul 7 2004, 01:44 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
QUOTE(Foolish Heart @ Jun 24 2004, 4:09 AM) Here's a poem for the guy that understands me, he's dying. I won't tell you any more private things about me. I write my poems based on my feelings, it's how I deal with my feelings. It's really hard for me to let him go. Fading Away, by Foolish Heart [Me] You walk in my life Now your fading away Heart beating so fast Tears fill my eyes Take my hand Im here to help I look at you Blurred in confusion Your fading away Hold me tight Heres my heart Forever yours to keep Dont forget I'll follow you I love you so Just for you to know haha i thot this was made by jackie ono! HAHAHA!! lols same sn huh? haha newais awww someone's dying and u made it for that person? awww thats so sad T_T but i think thats cute to give ur heart to him even tho he dies T_T |
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Jul 10 2004, 10:07 PM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
whos jackie!!?? ahh, well thanks.
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