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 Jun 30 2009, 04:45 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥  Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587  |
I created this image yesterday without even factoring in the position of the text. I was trying to position today but I can't seem to get it right ): Should I leave it as it is right now? I added on a white background for the text; that can be taken out. Or should I put the text beneath the banner, or next to it, or take it out altogether? o__O
Slight editing: Font change: |
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Jun 30 2009, 04:48 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Honestly, I think the phrase's font is too big.
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Jun 30 2009, 04:49 PM
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 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
I really like it as is. Where the quote from?
Yeah, the font could be smaller though |
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Jun 30 2009, 04:49 PM
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사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
Natalia: Now that I look at it, it is a little big. What about the filler text?
Abbey: The quote is from "Caged Bird", a poem by Maya Angelou. |
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Jun 30 2009, 04:54 PM
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Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
I think it looks fine.
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Jun 30 2009, 04:56 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
I personally like the size of the text. Unless you didn't intend on making that the focus of the layout, I think it fits. The only thing I would say would be to use two different fonts (like, keep "freedom" in the big, fancy cursive but change everything else to something more basic).
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Jun 30 2009, 05:15 PM
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사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
Meh, couldn't find another font that would match. I downsized the quote font a little bit and shifted it so there's more room for the filler text (which I also moved). Minor changes.
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Jun 30 2009, 05:22 PM
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Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
I dk but there's something that looks weird to me. I just can't point it out though.
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Jun 30 2009, 05:26 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
^I think it's the font. It looks really good for the word freedome but too busy for the rest of the quote. Did you try maybe a small goregia? or some font lie that?
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Jun 30 2009, 05:34 PM
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Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
^Yeeeeeah. That's it. And the large spacing between the paragraph and "freedom."
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Jun 30 2009, 05:39 PM
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사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
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Jun 30 2009, 07:42 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Looks nice Gabrielle! Your edits got better and better, but there's still something that irks me a little, yet I don't know what.
Oh well. Great job! 
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Jun 30 2009, 08:08 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
I reeeaalllyyyyyyyy like the last one after the font change. :)
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Jul 1 2009, 11:46 AM
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사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
Mmk, can't find anything else to fix in it. Going to submit (:
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Jul 1 2009, 01:16 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
I am really loving all your layouts lately. Great job. :D
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