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 Jun 27 2009, 12:29 PM
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No cutting out anything, no tracing anything, and I'm quite proud of myself. I don't really think I have a good mind for visualizing these things, so I'm pretty happy with the outcome.
 Thoughts? After some minor changes: 
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Jun 27 2009, 12:41 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I think it looks pretty good but it's a little weird. The tail seems to be a wee bit too big and the beak looks a little bit too small. I also think you should make it more obvious where the wing is because it sort of looks like it doesn't have any wings. Otherwise, good job!
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Jun 27 2009, 01:51 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 75 Joined: Feb 2009 Member No: 717,000 |
Alright, I changed the beak and got rid of some of the weird fat looking stuff around his face haha
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Jun 27 2009, 01:56 PM
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 I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
i think the second version looks way better. the beak change helped a lot imo.
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Jun 27 2009, 02:00 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
better.
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Jun 27 2009, 02:02 PM
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 asdfghjkl; Group: Official Designer Posts: 1,121 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 665,416 |
haha, first thing that came to mind was twitter, lol
&yeah the second one is much better than the first. good job on your first try[: i still have yet to learn how to use the pen tool, haha |
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Jun 27 2009, 02:14 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 75 Joined: Feb 2009 Member No: 717,000 |
Twitter?! Oh no hahah. I'm not much into the whole twitter thing... at all.
Thanks guys 
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Jun 27 2009, 03:24 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
So cute! The edit looks a lot better. Nice job, Rachel.
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Jun 27 2009, 07:26 PM
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 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
Cute. I love it. I am still useless with the pen tool. :[
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Jun 27 2009, 10:09 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 75 Joined: Feb 2009 Member No: 717,000 |
You guys are great. I feel so inspired to make more things now
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Jun 28 2009, 12:19 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,801 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 568,102 |
Adorable. I like the second one a lot better.
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