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First time of actually making something with the pen tool
LaRachel
post Jun 27 2009, 12:29 PM
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No cutting out anything, no tracing anything, and I'm quite proud of myself. I don't really think I have a good mind for visualizing these things, so I'm pretty happy with the outcome.



Thoughts?

After some minor changes:
 
Mikeplyts
post Jun 27 2009, 12:41 PM
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I think it looks pretty good but it's a little weird. The tail seems to be a wee bit too big and the beak looks a little bit too small. I also think you should make it more obvious where the wing is because it sort of looks like it doesn't have any wings. Otherwise, good job! thumbsup.gif
 
LaRachel
post Jun 27 2009, 01:51 PM
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Alright, I changed the beak and got rid of some of the weird fat looking stuff around his face haha
 
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post Jun 27 2009, 01:56 PM
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i think the second version looks way better. the beak change helped a lot imo.
 
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post Jun 27 2009, 02:00 PM
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better. thumbsup.gif
 
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post Jun 27 2009, 02:02 PM
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haha, first thing that came to mind was twitter, lol
&yeah the second one is much better than the first. good job on your first try[:
i still have yet to learn how to use the pen tool, haha
 
LaRachel
post Jun 27 2009, 02:14 PM
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Twitter?! Oh no hahah. I'm not much into the whole twitter thing... at all.

Thanks guys happy.gif
 
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post Jun 27 2009, 03:24 PM
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So cute! The edit looks a lot better. Nice job, Rachel. flowers.gif
 
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post Jun 27 2009, 07:26 PM
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Cute. I love it. I am still useless with the pen tool. :[
 
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post Jun 27 2009, 10:09 PM
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You guys are great. I feel so inspired to make more things now thumbsup.gif
 
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post Jun 28 2009, 12:19 AM
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Adorable. I like the second one a lot better. flowers.gif
 

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