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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
Well, I went with a totally different direction since I didn't really know what to add to the Watercolour layout. I think I should have done more but ehh...not really going for much. I just wanted that clean, simple, minimal look that isn't AMAZING but still eye-appealing, if you get what I mean. What do you think?
Kind of torn on what to add, if I should add anything that is. C&C would be cool. Thanks. ![]() EDIT: (Removed brushes.) EDIT #2: (Lowered the opacity of the brushes.) |
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![]() kthxbai ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 ![]() |
I think it would look better without the brushes.
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
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![]() Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 ![]() |
I like it but I'd like to see what it looks like without the brushes.
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#5
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
Alright, updated. I don't think it looks any better though.
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![]() Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 ![]() |
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#7
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 ![]() |
I dk. The brushes look kind of cool but then they get in the way of the text. Have you tried lowering the opacity on them to see if that looks good?
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#8
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
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#9
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 ![]() |
I think it looks better than when it was at full opacity.
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#10
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 ![]() |
its still a bit plain...or at least more plain then what im use to seeing from you.
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
I think it looks better than when it was at full opacity. ![]() Ehh... I'm sort of diggin that low opacity. ![]() its still a bit plain...or at least more plain then what im use to seeing from you. Yeah, I know, but I didn't really want to make something amazing. Just a simple cB layout is fine. ![]() The whole thing looks plain to me. I'm not really sure what to suggest to add more creativity to the layout. ![]() Hm. Yeah, I agree but I went ahead and coded it. Hopefully with the music and content it doesn't look to plain. ![]() |
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![]() show me a garden thats bursting to life ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 ![]() |
Lowered opacity and maybe throw in a marble-esque texture in there, also on lower opacity and it'll look awesome. :D
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
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![]() kthxbai ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 ![]() |
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![]() Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 ![]() |
I like the last edit best, but I liked the first one a lot too. Great job mike!
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
Ok, updated. I guess it looks somewhat better. ![]() Manny said she liked the low opacity, but you disagreed and said you liked the low opacity. (lol that sounds funny ![]() You didn't read what you quoted. I don't think so. I never disagreed. I just said it look somewhat better. ![]() EDIT: I like the last edit best, but I liked the first one a lot too. Great job mike! Thanks Abbey. ![]() |
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![]() DDR \\ I'm Dee :) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Mentor Posts: 8,662 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 384,020 ![]() |
All these agreeing disagreeing opacity stuff is confusing me.
Anyhoo, it does feel like it's missing something. I like the full opacity one, but the part that looks like a bit of an eyesore is the big loop by the e and p. I think that's because the other areas are rough and that one loop is smooth. (Ok, I'm being picky) Maybe if you found a more edgier background than the horizontal stripes it will add a little extra flare to it *shrug |
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#20
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![]() i like boobies, yes I do. I like boobies - how 'bout you? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 620 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 662,457 ![]() |
Maybe try... full opacity at the base where it connects to the letters, and fade them out at the tips?
But to be honest, I think the whole thing is a bit boring... sowwy. =X |
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#21
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Newbie ![]() Group: Member Posts: 5 Joined: Jun 2009 Member No: 732,379 ![]() |
I don't think it looks boring, it looks clean and professional imo.
I do think it looks better without the brushes, but if you are set on using the brushes, I would suggest trying to make them a little closer to the letters, not so wild. That might help. |
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