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 Apr 23 2009, 08:12 PM
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 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll  Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480  |
I am starting a series called The Family. It will consist of a mom, dad, sister, and brother. Then when I am done I'll merge them all together in one big happy family. No real reason why, just portfolio and practice I guess.
Original: http://i42.tinypic.com/10fu7vt.png horns: UPDATE UPDATE 2 |
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Apr 23 2009, 10:21 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
Whoa, what a transformation, haha. I like the first one better though.
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Apr 23 2009, 10:25 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,028 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 579,129 |
I think it looks pretty cool. ^I like the first one too.
The second one might look better if the horns were a little more distinctive. Also, they're not symmetrical, or so it seems. I'd move his left horn a little higher up and away from his eyebrow. |
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Apr 23 2009, 10:28 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Woah this is pretty trippy. I love what you did to his eyes. I like the overall editing. I think it'd look better without the horns though. Great job.
 Can't wait to see the rest of the family.
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Apr 23 2009, 10:30 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
I think the horns would be better if you rotated them a little and made them smaller and put them sticking out of his hair.
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Apr 23 2009, 10:39 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
QUOTE(Pooonani @ Apr 23 2009, 10:25 PM)  I think it looks pretty cool. ^I like the first one too. The second one might look better if the horns were a little more distinctive. Also, they're not symmetrical, or so it seems. I'd move his left horn a little higher up and away from his eyebrow. I see what you mean, the horns are wayy lop sided. I'll be sure to fix them. Thanks QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Apr 23 2009, 10:28 PM) Woah this is pretty trippy. I love what you did to his eyes. I like the overall editing. I think it'd look better without the horns though. Great job. Can't wait to see the rest of the family.lol Thanks QUOTE(jcp @ Apr 23 2009, 10:30 PM) I think the horns would be better if you rotated them a little and made them smaller and put them sticking out of his hair. Eh, I think it would look strange in his hair, but I will move them up further. Thanks |
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Apr 24 2009, 12:35 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 339 Joined: Mar 2009 Member No: 721,527 |
The eyebrows are falling a little flat for me, and why are the pupils all wobbly?
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Apr 24 2009, 12:51 AM
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Looks cool, I like both of them just the same
 I'm just going to say that the eyebrow looks a bit feminine. (to me)
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Apr 24 2009, 01:08 AM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
Oh la la. I love this. I also love the concept behind it too. The whole combining. It's definitely a great piece of portfolio fluff.
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Apr 24 2009, 05:13 AM
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his nose looks pointy with that texture. =\
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Apr 24 2009, 04:36 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
I'd hate to run into him in a dark alley.
Anyway, it looks good. I prefer the hornless versions, though. |
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Apr 24 2009, 04:40 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I like the first version too. Idk, I'm not really crazy about the horns but still, that's an awesome edit. Great job, Abbey.
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Apr 24 2009, 05:26 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
the horns definitely look better on the second version but i'd still move the horn on the right back a bit more. you did a crazygood job :DD
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Apr 24 2009, 06:11 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
QUOTE(Janette @ Apr 24 2009, 12:51 AM) Looks cool, I like both of them just the same I'm just going to say that the eyebrow looks a bit feminine. (to me)QUOTE(technicolour @ Apr 24 2009, 01:08 AM) Oh la la. I love this. I also love the concept behind it too. The whole combining. It's definitely a great piece of portfolio fluff. Thanks guys.  QUOTE(fixtatik @ Apr 24 2009, 05:13 AM) his nose looks pointy with that texture. =\ I lighted to were toy can see the left side of the face more, does that help? QUOTE(schizo @ Apr 24 2009, 04:36 PM) I'd hate to run into him in a dark alley. Anyway, it looks good. I prefer the hornless versions, though. I think I do too, I really want to make the horns work though. QUOTE(Mikeplyts @ Apr 24 2009, 04:40 PM) I like the first version too. Idk, I'm not really crazy about the horns but still, that's an awesome edit. Great job, Abbey. QUOTE(elletricity @ Apr 24 2009, 05:26 PM) the horns definitely look better on the second version but i'd still move the horn on the right back a bit more. you did a crazygood job :DD How about now? and Thanksss. |
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Apr 24 2009, 06:47 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Apr 24 2009, 07:11 PM) How about now? and Thanksss. Ooo, nice update. I'm still not a fan of horns but these look pretty good. It still looks kind of wierd...but idk why.  Good job though.
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Apr 24 2009, 08:04 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
Yeah, I think I am going to start over on the horns.
I started a ruff design of the father not done but: If I lose the horns on The Brother then I will take them off here. Not done, but a ruff start. http://i41.tinypic.com/2dtpt8k.png |
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Apr 24 2009, 08:17 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,028 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 579,129 |
The horns look fake, but you said it's a ruff start so I'm assuming you'll fix dat up.
Looks nice I like what you did with it so far. I think you can make him look creepier, though. His facial expression seems a little too neutral and he definitely does not give off the same vibe that the brother does. Can't wait to see when you're done O:! |
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Apr 25 2009, 12:28 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
lose the horns and itll b dope
Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Apr 25 2009, 02:30 AM
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 ٩(●̮̮̃•̃)۶ Group: Official Member Posts: 1,403 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,173 |
QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Apr 24 2009, 06:04 PM) Yeah, I think I am going to start over on the horns. I started a ruff design of the father not done but: If I lose the horns on The Brother then I will take them off here. Not done, but a ruff start. http://i41.tinypic.com/2dtpt8k.png The angle of the right horn is offf. Since your left horn is kind of angled, the right horn should be too... cause right now it's more straight. If the face was a complete sideview, then your angles would be correct. |
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Apr 25 2009, 07:46 AM
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QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Apr 24 2009, 07:11 PM) I lighted to were toy can see the left side of the face more, does that help? much better. and i like it more with the non-wiggly irises, too. honestly, i think your werewolf-thing version looks better than the original. the original freaked me out. |
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Apr 25 2009, 08:22 AM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Apr 24 2009, 09:04 PM) Yeah, I think I am going to start over on the horns. I started a ruff design of the father not done but: http://i42.tinypic.com/2ryln38.png If I lose the horns on The Brother then I will take them off here. Not done, but a ruff start. http://i41.tinypic.com/2dtpt8k.png Yeah, I agree that the right horn's angle is messed up. If it was a profile shot, then the horns would be fine but yeah....Oh, and also, I think you should kind of make the father have the same dark vibe that the brother has. Like make the background darker and his skin more darker/hairy. It's a nice start though.
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Apr 25 2009, 12:51 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
QUOTE(fixtatik @ Apr 25 2009, 07:46 AM) much better. and i like it more with the non-wiggly irises, too. honestly, i think your werewolf-thing version looks better than the original. the original freaked me out. lol The guy does have a really weird face. QUOTE(Mikeplyts @ Apr 25 2009, 08:22 AM) Yeah, I agree that the right horn's angle is messed up. If it was a profile shot, then the horns would be fine but yeah....Oh, and also, I think you should kind of make the father have the same dark vibe that the brother has. Like make the background darker and his skin more darker/hairy. It's a nice start though. Eh, I tossed that version, I was just fixated on him having a white suit but the picture doesn't have much too it. new: http://i40.tinypic.com/16ase3k.png This guy looks exactly like one of my teachers. |
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Apr 25 2009, 01:27 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Ooo, I like that one but it looks more of a "brother" than a "father".
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Apr 25 2009, 01:44 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
Eh, as long as he looks somewhat older I can't complain. Apparently profile shots of old men, where they aren't doing some goofy smile, are not in high demand.
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Apr 25 2009, 05:17 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Apr 25 2009, 02:44 PM) Eh, as long as he looks somewhat older I can't complain. Apparently profile shots of old men, where they aren't doing some goofy smile, are not in high demand. Yeah, I get you. *sigh*  It's good anyhow. :)
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