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 Apr 16 2009, 05:45 PM
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Apr 16 2009, 05:48 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I think they're kind of nice. Although, Alfred's skin is kind of pale but idk if you did that on purpose...I think you good job though. I hope you win the contest.
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Apr 16 2009, 05:54 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
^It's on purpose. He's supposed to be albino-ish.
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Apr 16 2009, 05:57 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Oh ok.
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Apr 16 2009, 06:57 PM
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 DDR \\ I'm Dee :) Group: Mentor Posts: 8,662 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 384,020 |
Lol, once I saw Alfred (nice choice of names, btw) I was thinking he was supposed to be albino. An albino in board shorts? heh. I like how you did Alfred and Ellie's eyes.
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Apr 16 2009, 08:05 PM
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 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
^I thought she did a vector of the butler from Batman. LOL
I think you have a great chance. I mean, from what I have seen, anime drawings in the end all look the same. But yours will stand out more. Bobo is adorable. |
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Apr 16 2009, 10:53 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
I seriously considered the Batman thing when I named him, haha. But the name seemed too perfect for him, so I couldn't change it.
Anyway, thanks guys. 
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Apr 16 2009, 11:29 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,801 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 568,102 |
So awesome. You should definitely post the story here in PDF or something whenever you're done. I've never read any
Hope you win! |
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Apr 17 2009, 12:49 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
These are adorable, Gabi. You shouldn't be worried; I'm sure you'll win ;) And yeah post the story!
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Apr 17 2009, 05:29 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
personally like narrower faces, but that's just me. your characters are really cute, and unique-looking. good luck! i'll be rooting for you (:
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Apr 23 2009, 05:24 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
I editted the first post with a link to page one of the actual comic.
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Apr 23 2009, 05:56 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I think it looks pretty nice! It's cute, too.
I like it a lot! Great job, Gabi!
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Apr 23 2009, 10:29 PM
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Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Haha aw the comic is so cute! I love it. Cute story.
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Apr 24 2009, 04:01 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
QUOTE(livwho @ Apr 17 2009, 12:29 AM)  So awesome. You should definitely post the story here in PDF or something whenever you're done. I've never read any Anime, but I'd sure love to, especially if it's user generated. lol Liv, anime isn't read; it's animated, hence the name. Manga (pronounced "mon-guh") is what you read. ;) Gabi, Bobo is adorable. |
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Apr 24 2009, 04:39 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
^Really? I didn't know that...but I don't really know anything about anime/manga in general. All I know is that I watched Sailor Moon when I was five.
 Anyway, thanks guys. I really appreciate it. |
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Apr 25 2009, 08:25 AM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
QUOTE(schizo @ Apr 24 2009, 05:39 PM) ^Really? I didn't know that...but I don't really know anything about anime/manga in general. All I know is that I watched Sailor Moon when I was five. Anyway, thanks guys. I really appreciate it. Lol yeah. Anime is like manga but animated. So shows like Naruto, Bleach, or Sailor Moon would be anime as to where the "comics" would be manga. Oh, and Gabi, are you working on the Ellie story? I can't wait to see it. :)
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Apr 25 2009, 11:38 AM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
^She'll end up part of the Alfred story (hopefully). I'm trying to squeeze her in the second page, but it doesn't look like that'll be happening.
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Apr 25 2009, 02:07 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,801 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 568,102 |
QUOTE(interpretation @ Apr 24 2009, 04:01 PM) lol Liv, anime isn't read; it's animated, hence the name. Manga (pronounced "mon-guh") is what you read. ;) Gabi, Bobo is adorable. Ehg, I are n00b. Oh my Jesus, I love the first page. You will win. You will. |
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Apr 25 2009, 05:07 PM
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Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
QUOTE(schizo @ Apr 16 2009, 06:45 PM) Edit: I finished the first page of the actual comic. Thanks to my teacher moving the due date up a good four days, I spent the whole week working on this in any free time I got. I'm exhausted and it doesn't even look half as nice as I wanted it to. Me = Not the happiest camper right now. Page one. It's really going to suck when I don't win and realize all of this was for nothing.  Don't think that way! The first page is really good; I love it! You have a good chance of winning. |
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Apr 26 2009, 07:06 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
Aw, well thanks guys. You're all too kind.
 Anyway, I updated with the second page. I'm a lot happier with how this one came out than the other. It was a lot easier, too. I think it was because I had the weekend and wasn't so tired from testing. |
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Apr 26 2009, 07:09 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 339 Joined: Mar 2009 Member No: 721,527 |
It's never for nothing. Even if you don't win, think of it as a good exercise to improve yourself.
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Apr 26 2009, 08:59 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Awesome! I actually like this a lot more than the first page. Oh, and, if you don't mind, what is the actual story about Gabi? Is it supposed to make "life" more fun and less boring/dull?
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Apr 26 2009, 09:00 PM
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 Tick tock, Bill Group: Administrator Posts: 8,764 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 333,948 |
Gabi, Iz LOVES this (he happened to be in here when I was clicking your links). Way cool. :D
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Apr 26 2009, 10:27 PM
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Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
I like how colorful the second page is!
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Apr 26 2009, 10:30 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
The story line is great so far.
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