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Mar 7 2009, 09:21 PM
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![]() kthxbai ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
I'm going to just consider these my first vectors since this is the first time I've ever used a vectoring program... all my other "vectors" were on bitmap programs.. so they don't count :3
^ I'm not sure about this one...... I thought it would look cool, but ehh....... ^This one I just did. I like it way more than #1 :O comments?? Please give feedback. I love vectoring and the whole style of vectoring.. I want to keep practicing and get good at it. edit// ok I blurred the 2nd one.. is it better? |
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Mar 7 2009, 09:29 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
Hey, good job on your first try!
I personally prefer the first one, because the picture is clean itself. Your attempt to vectoring the first image was close, but what's with the shapes inside the fruit? |
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Mar 7 2009, 09:32 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
The first one definitely looks better. Maybe put the second pear's stem on the first pear. I just think you need to work on your shaping because it's choppy. Other than that, it's good for a first try.
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Mar 7 2009, 09:43 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
The first one isnt a vector? Its just a pear with a vector stem and it looks like its been blurred.
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Mar 7 2009, 09:53 PM
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
The first one isnt a vector? Its just a pear with a vector stem and it looks like its been blurred. Ehh, maybe. But yeah, I like the first one better because it's cleaner and doesn't have those weird shapes in the pear. It might look a little better maybe if you kind of blended those shapes in the second one, but idk. Also, I agree with Nat, the edges are a bit choppy but other than that, good job. |
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Mar 7 2009, 09:54 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
Oh and too add a side note, I think the colors from the two images are a bit off.
Try to keep the same colors, shadows, shades, etc. |
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Mar 7 2009, 11:21 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
FYI, it's not a technically a vector anymore if you use effects that convert the layers to raster layers.
Anyway, they look pretty good. The area around the stem is a bit iffy in all of them, though. |
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Mar 7 2009, 11:22 PM
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![]() kthxbai ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
^ what's that?
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Mar 7 2009, 11:26 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
A raster layer? I don't know the technical definition of one (Google is a magical place). All I know is that vectors can be resized without pixelation, rasters can't.
In every program I've used, if you blur something, it's no longer vector. |
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Mar 7 2009, 11:26 PM
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![]() /人◕‿‿◕人\ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
![]() I'm sorry I had to be so unproductive in this thread. |
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Mar 7 2009, 11:27 PM
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![]() kthxbai ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
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Mar 9 2009, 07:21 PM
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![]() ٩(●̮̮̃•̃)۶ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 1,403 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,173 |
I prefer the first one (although I know it doesn't look like the common vector style), but without the blurred stem. Also, work on your shapes and making them more rounded.
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