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synatribe
post Mar 8 2009, 04:53 PM
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I finished the design aspects of this site, but now I just need to fill in the pages
:] tell me what you think,

p.s: I had a real hard time with this one

http://fashionlara.com
 
manny-the-dino
post Mar 8 2009, 04:56 PM
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Dang a lot of people are posting in Showcase today. But I like it. I love what you did with the logo as far as the colors. The only thing is that the animation is a going a bit slow for me. But great job! flowers.gif
 
Tomates
post Mar 8 2009, 04:58 PM
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very very good i love the colours thumbsup.gif
 
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post Mar 8 2009, 04:58 PM
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I really like it. How much did you charge if any? The colors are great.
 
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post Mar 8 2009, 04:59 PM
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Freaking awesome. I think the floral in the background should go down a little farther and like fade a little more.
 
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post Mar 8 2009, 05:02 PM
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holy shit.

wow. amazing.
 
1angel3
post Mar 8 2009, 05:04 PM
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OMG I love it!! The logo looks good.
 
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post Mar 8 2009, 05:04 PM
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QUOTE(jcp @ Mar 8 2009, 02:59 PM) *
I think the floral in the background should go down a little farther and like fade a little more.

Oh I didn't even notice the background, tbh. But yes I agree with Joseph.

Their clothing line is alright, imo.
 
synatribe
post Mar 8 2009, 06:23 PM
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thanks everyone! :] I really appreciate all the feedback :] it was $100 for the design, and domain plus making all of the pages. :] and yea, the background was such a b*tch haha :]
 
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post Mar 8 2009, 06:44 PM
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Normally I hate fixed backgrounds...but it worked.
 
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post Mar 8 2009, 11:02 PM
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I love the simplicity and colors you used. Better fonts could've been used for the content area and the footer, but it still looks nice and clean.
 
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post Mar 9 2009, 04:48 PM
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I love it. Very professional. :D
 
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post Mar 9 2009, 05:12 PM
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Very nice! I really like it esp. the animation! The logo looks good too. Great job. thumbsup.gif
 
1angel3
post Mar 9 2009, 05:32 PM
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^ I agree, the font color is blinding against the green background.
 
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post Mar 9 2009, 06:52 PM
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^I agree about the text. Maybe if it was black or something it would look better. But I like it :D The colors are pretty.

I like that pink shirt in the animation lol tongue.gif

 
synatribe
post Mar 11 2009, 12:01 AM
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QUOTE(divergent @ Mar 9 2009, 05:13 PM) *
You've definitely improved from when you first started coming here. hatsoff.gif

However, I still don't like the logo. The translucent label on the images between the blue image and the yellow, there is a height difference. One is bigger than the other (the yellow one is wider). They should both be the same size if they're positioned in the same place. It made my eyes jump when I watched it a few times.

On the about page - You have a very light blue text, or that's just what it looks like when against the bright green background. I think it could be better if you made it a more complimentary color to the bright green. On the same page the store hours and location is in regular black text. It should match that of the about text.

On the contact page - one link to the "view map" is the ugly blue color, and then you have a link "F.A.Q's" that's grey, and barely legible. Another note about the "black" text, if you don't bold it, it should be spaced out more, so it's easier to read, or a larger point size.


it's white text against the green background, I cant seem to find a legible hex code for that background, and I really cannot do anything about the logo :]
 
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post Mar 11 2009, 05:39 PM
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Change the font for the bottom links.

They are an eye sore.


Make it so the page doesn't scroll as well, it shouldn't need to be scrolling.
 

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