More retouches... Options

[Maccabee]

I decided to do some retuches after seeing the markster's...
Before I continue doing more I want to see what you think. And I need to do better.
My bro will be pretty mad at me for posting these but...

Before:
http://i43.tinypic.com/aw2jwm.jpg


After:
http://i44.tinypic.com/35dcl7p.png
(I sorta think I ruined this one with that lighting but I merged the layer on accident...o and for some reason I cant post thumbs?!)

I personally dont like these pics cause his hair isnt styled like it usually is and I dont like the angle and stuff...
O and once I get some comments and criticism I'm gonna delete this thread cause my bro really will be angry.

And my other bro:
(this is supposed to be a funny face. He doesnt have downsyndrome.)

Beofre:
Before
After:
after
(minor change)