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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
Well, I was thinking of making a new cB layout so I wipped something up last night and just figured I would get some c&c on it. What do you think of it? Should I add more or remove some? Maybe edit some text or something? Thanks.
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 ![]() |
I actually like it a lot, but there are a couple things that bother me. For one, I think the grey totally dulls the layout. I think a white gradient might look better. Also, I'm not a fan of the rainbow divider between the friends and comments. Everything looks so weathered and worn, and that's so clean. It doesn't fit.
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#3
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![]() Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 ![]() |
Make the content area a dark white, like eeeeee (just something more white than gray) I would just get rid of the divider all together. And maybe try and put the same brushes or texture on "MikePLyts" that you did on the content area.
I don't know, it's ok I guess. Edit: Looking at your past layouts this is a really big improvement. |
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#4
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 ![]() |
Make the rainbow divider white.
And i like the texture you used in the content. |
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#5
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![]() /人◕‿‿◕人\ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 ![]() |
Make the divider dark grey, not white.
And I don't like those weird Bump maps you used on the text. Other than that, it's pretty cool. |
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#6
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![]() AIDS at RAVES. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,386 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 598,878 ![]() |
its more colorful than your other layouts. but the friends and the border overlay for the comments make's it look a little on the rainbow pride side if you know what I mean, but definately more color and better than your other layouts :]
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#7
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 ![]() |
I like the whole layout of the layout but you used too many rainbow colors, imo. Like I think the brushes & "MIKEPLYTS" look good in rainbow but the things in the content area that are in rainbow become too much. I think the gray looks fine. Just make it lighter, I guess.
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#8
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
Do you think it would look better if I made the "Friends" and "Comment" headers dark like the other text in the "Criticizing is easy, art is difficult" header?
Also, I may make the divider a bit darker and greyish and maybe even a bit transparent. Do you think that would look better? Oh, and what if I added some sort of "dirty" or grungy texture on the "Mikeplyts" header? Edit: Also, do you think this layout would look good on a gradient background? If so, what gradient should I use? |
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#9
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 ![]() |
If you add a gradient do it seperately and use background-repeat:repeat-x;
and do a light grey to white. |
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#10
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 ![]() |
Do you think it would look better if I made the "Friends" and "Comment" headers dark like the other text in the "Criticizing is easy, art is difficult" header?: Yes but maybe a bit lighter.
Also, I may make the divider a bit darker and greyish and maybe even a bit transparent. Do you think that would look better?: I think it'd look fine. Go for it. Oh, and what if I added some sort of "dirty" or grungy texture on the "Mikeplyts" header?I think that would be weird. When I see your layout, I get a sort of arts feeling from it. And if you mix some grunge into it, it doesn't really match. Also, do you think this layout would look good on a gradient background? If so, what gradient should I use?: What if you just used the same color background you used for your image? Like you know.. what I mean? lol |
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#11
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 ![]() |
final verdict. everything shoul stay the same but...
make the "gay" divider dark grungy grey. Make the comments and friends words look the same as the whole criticizing thing. |
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#12
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
Ok, well I'll edit it some more tommorow. Oh, and Nat, I was making it on a white background, but then I deleted the white background to make it transparent.
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#13
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 786 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 488,341 ![]() |
I don't like the gray area, everything is so colorful except that. If you're going for the colorful and a contrast then that gray is a bad choice. A lighter gray would make it better.
And I agree, the font in the content area is a bad choice. Maybe use the same font as the MIKEPLYTS. |
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#14
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![]() show me a garden thats bursting to life ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 ![]() |
Honestly, I don't like it. And I'm not trying to be extremely harsh, but there are just so many colors in such large areas.
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#15
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
Alright, I updated it.
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#16
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![]() Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 ![]() |
Looks a lot better. nice job.
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#17
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![]() /人◕‿‿◕人\ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 ![]() |
It's looking a lot better. I can't think of anything you could do to improve it from where you are now.
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 2,936 Joined: Sep 2008 Member No: 683,235 ![]() |
you and your grey...
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#19
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 ![]() |
Awww man...
I think you should have only changed that bar... And you got rid of all that cool grungy text. |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 ![]() |
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