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 Jan 2 2009, 02:56 PM
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 talent on another level  Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735  |
more practice.
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Jan 2 2009, 03:25 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Really cool!
 although, I do think you could've made the water a bit more realistic.EDIT: Damn, same time post. haha. Anyways, yeah, what Thomas said. |
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Jan 2 2009, 03:41 PM
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 kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
QUOTE(divergent @ Jan 2 2009, 02:25 PM)  I like it, the only thing, the water, looks way off. :/ it just stands out the most, along with the rocks sorrounding it. Like everything else is really great quality, then you get to those two things, and they're like ehhh yeeuh. also, the leaves in the front.. they look like they're bad quality. I know you blurred them to make them out of focus, which is cool, but it looks like they would be bad quality even if you didn't blur them. The idea is uber cool though. edit// also, the sky is incredibly beautiful. 5 stars
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Jan 2 2009, 04:35 PM
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talent on another level Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
^ thanks for the feedback.
i wasn't fond of the water either, but i'm re-doing that. the leaves are hq quality. |
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Jan 2 2009, 06:39 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
Its like not symmetrical in an odd way.
If the leaves are lifting his right leg coming from the left the water should be coming from the right lifting his left leg. And like everyone said work in the water cause I didnt even know what it was. |
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Jan 2 2009, 07:35 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
QUOTE(JosephCohen123 @ Jan 2 2009, 07:39 PM) If the leaves are lifting his right leg coming from the left the water should be coming from the right lifting his left leg. I didn't even notice that until Joseph mentioned it.  But again, try to make it more symetrical which can make it look more realistic.
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Jan 2 2009, 08:16 PM
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 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
it might just be me, but everything seems to kinda be coming out of the guys ass.
The leaves look pretty ok to me, the is a little eh though. Great idea! I love this kind of art. |
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Jan 2 2009, 08:18 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
The water shadows look a bit awkward, but Awesome Picture for the most part.
The model has a big bootay, yoooo. ;D |
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Jan 2 2009, 09:03 PM
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talent on another level Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
thanks for the feedback.
i'll take everything in mind. |
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Jan 2 2009, 09:32 PM
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 Adobe Addict Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,237 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 113,043 |
I agree with all of the above, but this is still excellent.
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Jan 2 2009, 09:36 PM
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talent on another level Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
^ thanks!
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Jan 2 2009, 11:33 PM
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kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Jan 2 2009, 07:16 PM) it might just be me, but everything seems to kinda be coming out of the guys ass. The leaves look pretty ok to me, the is a little eh though. Great idea! I love this kind of art. oh wow i didn't even notice that until you said that... it definitely looks like he's pooping leaves and water. edit// also, i have a question... i'm very curious.. are the trees in the WAYY back of the image fake? were they not there in the original picture? did you add them yourself? or the grass in the middle? or those flowers in the front? |
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Jan 3 2009, 07:39 AM
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talent on another level Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
^ lol i'll fix that.
everything but the leaves, man, and water, were already part of the picture. |
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Jan 3 2009, 09:17 AM
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talent on another level Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
updated
 i'm kinda stuck on what to add next. my idea is to add elements in nature that are peaceful, so any ideas are welcome. |
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Jan 3 2009, 06:47 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
It looks good.
I dk on what you should add, umm, maybe some birds or something?
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Feb 9 2009, 11:18 PM
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talent on another level Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
UPDATED
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Feb 9 2009, 11:52 PM
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like it for the colors &&& the harmony, though i think theres alot going on &&& that kinda makes it a bit distracting
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Feb 9 2009, 11:57 PM
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talent on another level Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
QUOTE(divergent @ Feb 10 2009, 12:22 AM) I don't think the fast blurry streak behind the butterflies does the picture justice. :/ yeah i need to think of something else QUOTE(shakeene @ Feb 10 2009, 12:52 AM) like it for the colors &&& the harmony, though i think theres alot going on &&& that kinda makes it a bit distracting that's what i was thinking |
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