Hanna Beth Layout, Feedback Please??? Rating Options

[skyerawr]

New layout idea;
will have rollover navigation in the bottom box
and top box is content :)
which i may or may not seperate into two, not sure.
feedback?

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Edit: I used Moorepocket's Tutorial to edit the colouring, better or not?

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[Harp]

it's really nice
but, i actually like the one before the coloring.

[dilligrout]

Who da f*ck is Hannah Beth???
I love her shirt though the one with the sunburst!
Whats the thing on her shirt?

Without the coloring.. it's not good on your layout.
Its too pink for that kind of coloring.

[nightsong]

without the coloring looks better because she has a better shade of pink on her face to match with the bg, and the rest of her skin isn't a saturated color.
whereas the colored one is too bright yellowy orange and it clashes too much with the bg

[digitalfragrance]

My preference would be the colored one with a lighter shade of pink... maybe a peach. Try using the eyedropper in your image editor and pick a predominate shade that occurs in your images of Hanna Beth.

I don't think JaneAusten fits for a font in your design scheme. I think you're going for something more playful.. right? Try a non-scripted fon, and don't feel constrained to one line of text. Move individual words around, rotate their angles... etc.

Overall, great idea.

[Eww]

I think this is okay.
Something that really bothers me:
At the bottom of some pictures of her, you can see where the picture ends, since the table is transparent-ish. You can see her waist and up just floating around for a few of the images.

[skyerawr]

Who da f*ck is Hannah Beth???
I love her shirt though the one with the sunburst!
Whats the thing on her shirt?

Without the coloring.. it's not good on your layout.
Its too pink for that kind of coloring.

Hanna Beth is just pretty much a myspace/buzznet "scene queen",
google her and heaps will come up.




Other than that; thanks for the feedback guys i'll be playin around with it a bit today.
So; would it look better without transparent tables??
I gathered it'd look better pre-colouring :)
And...

I don't think JaneAusten fits for a font in your design scheme. I think you're going for something more playful.. right? Try a non-scripted fon, and don't feel constrained to one line of text. Move individual words around, rotate their angles... etc.

Any other suggestions to a font i could use? If not i'll play around with a few different ones.


Thanks guys xx

[Tomates]

Its a bit too pink. Also the thing that bugs me most is how you can the cutout bottoms.

[Mikeplyts]

^Yeah. If you want the tables to be transparent, try to kind of blend the "cut-out bottoms" and then put on the transparent tables. As for fonts, I'm not really good with suggesting fonts but you can always search at DaFont.com.