another queen buried at sea, lyric/poetry |
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 Nov 25 2008, 01:11 AM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
her glimmer is gold
but nobody sees the vibrant fighter of fear let's forget anger let's remake the content to be offered the fellowship of our happy disbelieving we will all remember we will all remember him. he walked with a purpose each step was radiation on the ground nature died in silence the avocado of the world, turning brown but we put in him our hope for the future ignoring what we see while aching and sickening our true healer is by the sea writhing a salt crusted sinkhole is her grave to be another dead queen buried at sea. |
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Nov 28 2008, 10:46 PM
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 kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
makes no sense to me.
You start off talking about a girl.. then for most of the poem you talk about a boy. Then at the very end, the girl magically reappears... ?? |
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Nov 29 2008, 11:27 PM
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fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
it will mean something to somebody, one day.
i don't write things cut and dry some times. if you really wanted to dissect what you read, emberfly, i'm sure it would make sense to you. |
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