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Nov 6 2008, 07:22 AM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
I already know of the problems in my banner. So please don't say anything about it. Tell me what you think of my website layout! I have a link in my signature but here's one that goes straight to my website. Click Here. Thanks! |
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Nov 6 2008, 10:02 AM
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![]() Death is a promise given to us at birth ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
i can't see your site.
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Nov 6 2008, 04:39 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
Same here. :/
Screenshot, perhaps? |
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Nov 6 2008, 04:52 PM
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
it doesnt match at all. Make the blue atleast darker
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Nov 6 2008, 05:07 PM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
it doesnt match at all. Make the blue atleast darker ok I can see it, hmm, the blend on the image sucks. Take away the hard edges! I already said that I know that the banner has its problems. I know your thinking, "then why did she use it?" I used it because I wanted to see if I could make a layout out of it.
Reason for edit: posts merged. please don't double post. thanks :) -nat
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Nov 6 2008, 06:14 PM
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![]() AIDS at RAVES. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,386 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 598,878 |
what is there to critique then, i think the purple content area is to ............. Idk, and your should make your site content expandable, it's too obvious that it's a static image and looks like half the effort was put into it
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Nov 6 2008, 06:38 PM
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![]() ٩(͡๏̯͡๏)۶ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,309 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,593 |
top half = perfect
bottom half = makeover please |
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Nov 6 2008, 06:46 PM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
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Nov 6 2008, 09:01 PM
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![]() Naomi loves you. Y'all may call me NaNa ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,925 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 427,774 |
The background would look good if it was black or dark blue. The background color for the content would look good if it was white or light light blue or the same blue that's in the top right of the banner.
Another thing that irks me, you don't have to put the words "Content" or "Navigation" on top of the content and navigation section! It's obvious and if people don't know the content area from the navigation area then they're clearly stupid. Another thing to fix is, make the content and navigation section the same width as the header plus align the layout more centered. Also the scroll bars on the navigation is annoying. What you should do is make background from the layout. Crop out a small piece of the content and navigation area, use it as a background and set it to repeat-y (Example, background-repeat: repeat-y). Confusing? Yeah I know, it's hard to explain. Another example! This was what I was talking about! http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/5315/image11rf3.png then you open your css and add it as a background like this: background-image:url("url here"); background-repeat: repeat-y;} So it would go smoothly don't put a border at the bottom making it look like a box and make it run off the page. You may know how to do that but just in case I explain it. Scroll bars are just annoying. If you need a live example then look at my layouts If you don't mind me mentioning something about the header itself. Just because you're going to use it for a layout, where's the site name? Or is it for visitor use? If for visitor use then add Johnny's name on there or his character's name. Wow I hope that helped! |
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Nov 7 2008, 07:26 AM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
The background would look good if it was black or dark blue. The background color for the content would look good if it was white or light light blue or the same blue that's in the top right of the banner. ok, I'll take that into consideration. Another thing that irks me, you don't have to put the words "Content" or "Navigation" on top of the content and navigation section! It's obvious and if people don't know the content area from the navigation area then they're clearly stupid. I've seen some sites do that but ok Another thing to fix is, make the content and navigation section the same width as the header plus align the layout more centered. Also the scroll bars on the navigation is annoying. What you should do is make background from the layout. Crop out a small piece of the content and navigation area, use it as a background and set it to repeat-y (Example, background-repeat: repeat-y). Confusing? Yeah I know, it's hard to explain. Everyone says they're annoying (the scrollbars) but I don't see it. I understand completly. Another example! This was what I was talking about! http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/5315/image11rf3.png then you open your css and add it as a background like this: background-image:url("url here"); background-repeat: repeat-y;} I made that. lol weird, how you found that. lol wow..........I've never had that happen before. hahaha! So it would go smoothly don't put a border at the bottom making it look like a box and make it run off the page. You may know how to do that but just in case I explain it. Scroll bars are just annoying. If you need a live example then look at my layouts ok, I'll check it out after school! thanks! :) If you don't mind me mentioning something about the header itself. Just because you're going to use it for a layout, where's the site name? Or is it for visitor use? If for visitor use then add Johnny's name on there or his character's name. I have his character's name in the top right corner. It's kinda faded out though. I was going to make it for vistor use but now I have some editing to do. |
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Nov 7 2008, 04:26 PM
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![]() Naomi loves you. Y'all may call me NaNa ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,925 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 427,774 |
ok, I'll take that into consideration. cool I've seen some sites do that but ok Yeah I have too but for some reason it always irk me but it's just my opinion but I've seen layouts that it looked good with it. I guess it's how you do it. Everyone says they're annoying (the scrollbars) but I don't see it. I understand completly. It's annoying to me because I like to see everything at once. It's okay sometimes like using it on myspace. It looks alright on website too sometimes. If you use scroll bars at least use iframes I made that. lol weird, how you found that. lol wow..........I've never had that happen before. hahaha! I crop it out from your layout lol. ok, I'll check it out after school! thanks! :) Thanks I have his character's name in the top right corner. It's kinda faded out though. Oh okay, make it a little more obvious I was going to make it for vistor use but now I have some editing to do. Good luck |
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Nov 7 2008, 04:29 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 312 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 597,269 |
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Nov 7 2008, 05:00 PM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
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Nov 7 2008, 06:01 PM
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
by any chance...are you planning on using your currents layouts coding for the pirates one?
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Nov 7 2008, 06:56 PM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
by any chance...are you planning on using your currents layouts coding for the pirates one? I guess I could do that but if you look at my website template in IE it is all screwed up. The content area doesn't stay next to the navigation area. So I would have to re-code it anyway. |
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Nov 7 2008, 08:05 PM
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:) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,636 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,459 |
LOL nvm then.
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Nov 7 2008, 08:23 PM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
Your website is pretty nice. I have a few things to point out that could be better. The middle image cuts off her head, and I think that looks kind of odd, you should move it down a bit so you can see more of her face. The sun rays on the right should be flipped, so that the background doesnt look like it repeats, but so it looks like the rays are sort of fanning out on the sides. (if that makes sense) Other than that, I like it, its pretty good. I didn't make that layout. I just wanted to see what it would look like on my website. |
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Nov 7 2008, 08:26 PM
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:) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,636 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,459 |
I didn't make that layout. I just wanted to see what it would look like on my website. Well, as far as your johnny depp layout goes. Its okay, the edges are blended very well, the images are pixelated and the colors don't go that well together. What program do you use? |
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Nov 7 2008, 08:32 PM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
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Nov 8 2008, 02:45 AM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 312 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 597,269 |
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Nov 8 2008, 09:10 AM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
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Nov 8 2008, 09:41 AM
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![]() (′ ・ω・`) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
did you make the website sugar blossom with jessica stem? well, in that website the white background is really ugly. just keep the border of the header picture white, the change the rest black. the font and blog colors are just weird, whatever.
that johnny depp website has ugly colors. seriously. that blue will kill the reader's eyes. the content and navigation font is basic and doesnt match. i dont like it. it's also very misplaced. in fact, they arent even needed. take it out for good. maybe you can make the borders of the modules more interesting, or actually dont have borders at all. |
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Nov 8 2008, 09:43 AM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
did you make the website sugar blossom with jessica stem? well, in that website the white background is really ugly. just keep the border of the header picture white, the change the rest black. the font and blog colors are just weird, whatever. I didn't make that. Someone else did. that johnny depp website has ugly colors. seriously. that blue will kill the reader's eyes. the content and navigation font is basic and doesnt match. i dont like it. it's also very misplaced. in fact, they arent even needed. take it out for good. maybe you can make the borders of the modules more interesting, or actually dont have borders at all. ok You can close this board now. |
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Nov 8 2008, 10:24 AM
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
I guess I could do that but if you look at my website template in IE it is all screwed up. The content area doesn't stay next to the navigation area. So I would have to re-code it anyway. well im not saying that you should do that because that is jocking and that wouldnt be fair to the person who made it if you just took their whole coding and used it for yourself, i was just wondering because thats what it looks like you were about to do no offence. |
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Nov 8 2008, 10:35 AM
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Irrisistable Cabbages. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
well im not saying that you should do that because that is jocking and that wouldnt be fair to the person who made it if you just took their whole coding and used it for yourself, i was just wondering because thats what it looks like you were about to do no offence. How would I be jocking my own layout? Is that possible? hahahahaha! ok |
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