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 Sep 12 2008, 09:48 PM
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yesterday i was inspired to make a nemo desktop.. didn't really know what i wanted, & came up with this.
what should i add? what should i get rid of? what can i improve on? be as harsh as you want lol. this is only my second time making a wallpaper. //EDIT 09-13-08: i put the crush back on bc i really like it.. & i used a cleaner font. my main focus was supposed to be the image on the bottom left.. but i knew i needed to put something else in the background, & came up with the film strip-type background. should i change that? picture credit: google images & samee21@deviantart.com |
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Sep 12 2008, 10:58 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
Uh, that big picture of Crush in the bottom right corner is UUBER DISTRACTING, like WHOA. If you 86-ed that, it'd be a pretty decent wallpaper to me, IMO.
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Sep 12 2008, 11:45 PM
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 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
Yeah get rid of Crush, and I think it would be good.
maybe brighten up the other photos? |
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Sep 13 2008, 12:57 AM
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I love it. Good job! Although, I liked it with Crush in the corner.. but it looks good the way it is now too!
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Sep 13 2008, 02:51 AM
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I think getting rid of Crush was a bad move. It looks way too boring now. Well to me at least. It kind of seems like you just plastered some images together and put text there. I think Crush gave it a little extra....something.
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Sep 13 2008, 10:35 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
Yeah, I liked when Crush was in the corner as well. Maybe try putting him back in, but get rid of all that fluff around him. I think that's what made it distracting.
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Sep 13 2008, 10:36 AM
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 Hello Newman. Group: Member Posts: 912 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 578,620 |
I kinda liked crush.
It's awesome either way though. :] |
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Sep 13 2008, 01:47 PM
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Well i liked it before aswell, but still its really good :)
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Sep 13 2008, 03:34 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 207 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 559,093 |
QUOTE(schizo @ Sep 13 2008, 08:35 AM)  Yeah, I liked when Crush was in the corner as well. Maybe try putting him back in, but get rid of all that fluff around him. I think that's what made it distracting. yeah, i liked it with crush too. but the 'fluff' came from one of those blurry round brushes... i didnt want to make crush look too cut out.. how can i make it less fluffy? |
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Sep 13 2008, 03:39 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
Regarding Crush being in the corner, I think it depends what you want the focus of the wallpaper to be on. Do you want people to focus on the scenes in the filmstrip or on Crush?
I don't think the font for "finding nemo" and the other quote match the whole Finding Nemo theme. |
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Sep 13 2008, 03:47 PM
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 poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
I really like the second version the best.
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