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What else should i add?
Tomates
post Aug 28 2008, 01:46 AM
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Its about 2:44am and ive been working on this and thinking what else to put on this for the past half hours
This is what i have so far

To me its lacking a lot of stuff, but i dont know what else i should add. Im having a creators block, and not to mention im really tired.

Any opinions on what else i should add?
 
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post Aug 28 2008, 12:03 PM
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yeah i know it looks boring even i think that, but i didnt know anyways to spruce it up
 
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post Aug 28 2008, 02:45 PM
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Ya add maybe another picture of the same model or a picture of a different model. And add a few more brushes in the back.. try to have a lot of layers.
 
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post Aug 28 2008, 03:48 PM
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I actually like the simplicity of the way it is now. The only thing that bothers me is the blur of the brushes in the back.
 
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post Aug 29 2008, 10:55 AM
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i have a texture right now in the back. Still looks a tad boring to me.

I was thinking about adding another model picture but it just didnt seem to fit.
Nor did some of the brushes i tried to use.

hmm. Doesnt look much different. I tried adding other textures but then it looked like there was too much going on

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post Aug 29 2008, 12:33 PM
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86 the pixely outline of the first girl. It looks just a bit tacky. Balance the image out. Move the girls over to the right and do the same effect on the left. Play with the coloring of the image. Add some random images to create something abstract. Like a lightbulb. Add some text. Oh, and 86 the blurry smudge things in the back.


Oh, fade the texture that you placed with the scratches and the diagonal stripes.



Sorry for being a bit....forward. It has a lot of potential. :)

 
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post Aug 29 2008, 05:28 PM
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^No no i really appericiate it
the only problem is i merged the model pictures together. I have a bad habbit of meging too many things together too early.

 
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post Aug 29 2008, 05:31 PM
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wat about some text, like small text in misc areas?
 
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post Aug 29 2008, 07:02 PM
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You should put a cliché quote somewhere.
The rest is beyond awesome. thumbsup.gif
 
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post Aug 29 2008, 09:05 PM
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yeahh.. you should add some text i think on the textured area is better but that's just my opinion
 
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post Aug 30 2008, 12:55 AM
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i agree about the text. more models would make it look better.
&imo, i like the one without the texture better. but that's just me.
lol
 
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post Aug 30 2008, 10:25 PM
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I was going to put some text saying Gemma ward.
And since some of you mentioned it i might put a quote in the background and make it trasnparent-eyy
 
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post Aug 30 2008, 10:31 PM
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well Natalie,i think it looks kinda cool,but thats just a noobies opinion
 
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post Aug 30 2008, 10:46 PM
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^ thank you : D

well i did edit it a bit more and i think im going to call this the finished product



What do you think?
 
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post Aug 30 2008, 10:50 PM
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i think that looks better,WOW!
ur def gonna have to give me some tips on haw to do this stuff
 
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post Aug 30 2008, 10:52 PM
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QUOTE(Bokfresh @ Aug 30 2008, 11:50 PM) *
i think that looks better,WOW!
ur def gonna have to give me some tips on haw to do this stuff

i can give you one good tip that works for me

dont think about what you want to do.
workds for me about 80% of the time

When i think about what i want to try to do, it turns out nothing like i planned and i scrap it.
Things tend to turn out better when im just randomly doing things
 
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post Aug 30 2008, 11:14 PM
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lol,i know what u mean.
everythings like that with me,haha!


but that looks really nice
 
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post Aug 30 2008, 11:15 PM
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Thank you very much *u*
 
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post Aug 30 2008, 11:43 PM
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QUOTE(Tomates @ Aug 30 2008, 11:15 PM) *
Thank you very much *u*



ur very much welcome



i finnaly found out how to do that qoute thingy
 
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post Aug 31 2008, 06:05 AM
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I love it. thumbsup.gif biggrin.gif
Nice finished picture!!!! _smile.gif
 
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post Aug 31 2008, 09:48 AM
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the finish product looks great!
 
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post Aug 31 2008, 11:08 AM
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Thank you very much : D
im actually really proud of this...for once *pats self on back*
anyways i might submit it on here and/or make a layout from it
 
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post Sep 1 2008, 03:07 PM
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QUOTE(Anarchy @ Aug 28 2008, 10:36 AM) *
It can use a texture and/or different brushes. It can probably use a different image of the same person as well. Right now it looks a bit boring to me.


agreed.

fyi, i luv your sig.

ha.
 

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