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Aug 28 2008, 01:46 AM
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
Its about 2:44am and ive been working on this and thinking what else to put on this for the past half hours
This is what i have so far To me its lacking a lot of stuff, but i dont know what else i should add. Im having a creators block, and not to mention im really tired. Any opinions on what else i should add? |
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Aug 28 2008, 12:03 PM
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
yeah i know it looks boring even i think that, but i didnt know anyways to spruce it up
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Aug 28 2008, 02:45 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 944 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 663,413 |
Ya add maybe another picture of the same model or a picture of a different model. And add a few more brushes in the back.. try to have a lot of layers.
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Aug 28 2008, 03:48 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
I actually like the simplicity of the way it is now. The only thing that bothers me is the blur of the brushes in the back.
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Aug 29 2008, 10:55 AM
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
i have a texture right now in the back. Still looks a tad boring to me.
I was thinking about adding another model picture but it just didnt seem to fit. Nor did some of the brushes i tried to use. hmm. Doesnt look much different. I tried adding other textures but then it looked like there was too much going on This post has been edited by Tomates: Aug 29 2008, 12:04 PM |
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Aug 29 2008, 12:33 PM
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show me a garden thats bursting to life ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
86 the pixely outline of the first girl. It looks just a bit tacky. Balance the image out. Move the girls over to the right and do the same effect on the left. Play with the coloring of the image. Add some random images to create something abstract. Like a lightbulb. Add some text. Oh, and 86 the blurry smudge things in the back.
Oh, fade the texture that you placed with the scratches and the diagonal stripes. Sorry for being a bit....forward. It has a lot of potential. :) |
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Aug 29 2008, 05:28 PM
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
^No no i really appericiate it
the only problem is i merged the model pictures together. I have a bad habbit of meging too many things together too early. |
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Aug 29 2008, 05:31 PM
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![]() AIDS at RAVES. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,386 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 598,878 |
wat about some text, like small text in misc areas?
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Aug 29 2008, 07:02 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
You should put a cliché quote somewhere.
The rest is beyond awesome. |
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Aug 29 2008, 09:05 PM
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the name's mario ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 1,270 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 656,520 |
yeahh.. you should add some text i think on the textured area is better but that's just my opinion
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Aug 30 2008, 12:55 AM
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![]() asdfghjkl; ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 1,121 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 665,416 |
i agree about the text. more models would make it look better.
&imo, i like the one without the texture better. but that's just me. lol |
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Aug 30 2008, 10:25 PM
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
I was going to put some text saying Gemma ward.
And since some of you mentioned it i might put a quote in the background and make it trasnparent-eyy |
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Aug 30 2008, 10:31 PM
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Member ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 15 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 680,591 |
well Natalie,i think it looks kinda cool,but thats just a noobies opinion
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Aug 30 2008, 10:46 PM
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
^ thank you : D
well i did edit it a bit more and i think im going to call this the finished product What do you think? |
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Aug 30 2008, 10:50 PM
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Member ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 15 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 680,591 |
i think that looks better,WOW!
ur def gonna have to give me some tips on haw to do this stuff |
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Aug 30 2008, 10:52 PM
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
i think that looks better,WOW! ur def gonna have to give me some tips on haw to do this stuff i can give you one good tip that works for me dont think about what you want to do. workds for me about 80% of the time When i think about what i want to try to do, it turns out nothing like i planned and i scrap it. Things tend to turn out better when im just randomly doing things |
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Aug 30 2008, 11:14 PM
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Member ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 15 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 680,591 |
lol,i know what u mean.
everythings like that with me,haha! but that looks really nice |
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Aug 30 2008, 11:15 PM
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
Thank you very much *u*
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Aug 30 2008, 11:43 PM
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Member ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 15 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 680,591 |
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Aug 31 2008, 06:05 AM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
I love it.
Nice finished picture!!!! |
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Aug 31 2008, 09:48 AM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 180 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 681,057 |
the finish product looks great!
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Aug 31 2008, 11:08 AM
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![]() poison ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
Thank you very much : D
im actually really proud of this...for once *pats self on back* anyways i might submit it on here and/or make a layout from it |
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Sep 1 2008, 03:07 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 254 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 682,007 |
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