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 Aug 26 2008, 01:40 AM
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 Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 944 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 663,413  |
I made this tonight. I know the text is terrible.. Im horrible at text.
But other than that.. if you could give me any advice and if you could even help me with the text. Thanks guys =)
Reason for edit: Please thumb your image if it stretches the board! - Cristy
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Aug 26 2008, 10:08 AM
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 Kimberly Group: Member Posts: 1,961 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 121,599 |
I like the theme you have going on.
 Buuuut. The text on the top doesnt blend in well with your image... like at the very end? It just cuts off... doesnt blend at all. Also, the random font brush you have on the top left corner seems a little out of place. I think it would've looked better if you couldnt see the bottom of it... like instead had it going behind the girl.
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Aug 26 2008, 10:22 AM
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 <(^_^<) DANCE!(>^_^)> Group: Official Member Posts: 1,304 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 586,621 |
i think this looks great. i agree about the top left text brush, it looks kind of random & out of place. maybe fade it into the background or like ^kimmytree said, put the girl in front of the text. otherwise i think it looks pretty cool.
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Aug 26 2008, 11:57 AM
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 asdfghjkl; Group: Official Designer Posts: 1,121 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 665,416 |
Agree about the text. the white background of the text is like, not blended. &i agree about the brush, maybe erase or like blend the bottom of that or put it behind the girl. but, i really like either way. good job
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Aug 26 2008, 04:32 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
It's a bit random, but I like it. I'm not a fan fo the starbust thing, though. It don't think it fits.
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