Notes While Listening |
Notes While Listening |
Jun 12 2008, 11:08 PM
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A dream.
The outline of a green hill, your red hair plastered against it. And you wrestled around Took a spot (right there right there) As I let words plunge into the weeds. And lately I’ve been considering birds and the sounds tiny feet make. White powder; I’ve never smelled it. I’ve never woken up and comforted someone. Not someone so fragile, so loud when protesting. But to interrupt whispered notes and entangled fingers and hearts, with wailing. With the assembling of small beds and circles under eyes. No. I let my dream fly. I poured the green hill Into the tub and it slipped down down into the drain. But my words will linger in the air Hissing and cracking when you’re near. |
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xoxo_proud Notes While Listening Jun 12 2008, 11:08 PM
doiink that was full of incredible images: I loved the dr... Jun 18 2008, 03:53 AM
xoxo_proud Thank you! Jun 20 2008, 02:13 PM
absinthe I agree with Betty. Great imagery. Jun 20 2008, 05:16 PM
xoxo_proud Thanks! Sorry for saying it so late Jul 28 2008, 03:39 PM
bluelily Vast depth and flow. You described one instance wi... Aug 19 2008, 08:23 PM![]() ![]() |