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ForgiveTheSinner
post Jul 25 2008, 01:02 AM
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Wow...most of my posts are in this section of the forum.

Anyways, criticize me to your hearts content, I'm already feeling bad so more wouldn't hurt.

Amaranthine V.2

Made everything from scratch...except the flower, I took that one early, rainy morning.
 
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post Jul 25 2008, 01:07 AM
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Thats really good.

Theres only one thing about it that bothers me:

In the Entrance section, theres one of those lights. It just looks funny to me.
 
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post Jul 25 2008, 08:22 AM
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ah no! lol, but I love cursive fonts and scriptina looked better then the others.

But if you have a font suggestion then I'm open to it.
 
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post Jul 25 2008, 09:40 AM
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I think it looks really pretty. I'm not a fan of the light blobs, but that's about it. I think something better could go in place of them. Maybe glowy butterflies? I don't know...

I don't really understand what the hatred is towards Scriptina. It looks okay to me, but if you're looking for another cursive font, my favorite is Jane Austen.
 
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post Jul 25 2008, 12:31 PM
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QUOTE(highwayto4355 @ Jul 25 2008, 09:52 AM) *
i like it except the scriptina. x]

i think a font that would look good is hanshand

also; i have a question. for the content area, does the background move or is it my eyes messing with me?

it looks like the little dots are moving around. x] and the header and footing color doesn't match w/ the color of the 'apparently moving dots'. xD


O.o moving? The background doesn't move lol.
 
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post Jul 25 2008, 01:01 PM
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I have nothing bad to say.
It looks very pritty.
 
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post Jul 25 2008, 01:49 PM
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this is sooooo pretty! i agree about the scriptina though, it doesn't really look that right. but everything else is amazing.
 
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post Jul 25 2008, 05:02 PM
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It's very pretty; I love the colors. I'm personally not a fan of the way your navigation works, but it's not really a big deal.

Some other cursive-y fonts are Zapfino Linotype 4, Windsong, Palace Script, Edwardian, Kunstler.............
 
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post Jul 25 2008, 05:04 PM
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wow this is really kool! the flower is amazing! u took that?? the only thing that bothers me a little is the blank space beside the content.

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that would b bad ace!!
 
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post Jul 25 2008, 10:51 PM
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Amazing. it looks great. I like how simple the colors are and it's very organized.
 
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post Jul 25 2008, 11:03 PM
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Lol, everyone hates the font except my brother and I.

But I'm too lazy to change it...

QUOTE(venti-anemoi @ Jul 25 2008, 05:02 PM) *
It's very pretty; I love the colors. I'm personally not a fan of the way your navigation works, but it's not really a big deal.

Some other cursive-y fonts are Zapfino Linotype 4, Windsong, Palace Script, Edwardian, Kunstler.............


and what do you mean about the navigation? can you be more specific on what you don't like about it so I can change it maybe.

I was going to make it into rollovers but didn't know where to put the links and what to make them so I didn't.
 
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post Jul 25 2008, 11:33 PM
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Oh, I just didn't like how I had to click on "visitor," then on "Avatars," then on the type of avatar in order to actually see any graphic. (I guess this is mainly in reference to the avatar section, then.) In short, I'm lazy. I'd rather click on one link and see something graphic-wise right away. XD

I would suggest having a section in the left-hand column labelled "Visitor" or something with individual links to each section. One less click. :DDDDDDD

Also, what bugs me about separating things like avatars into sections (e.g. animanga, celebrity, stock photos, etc.) is that sometimes (most of the time for me) I don't particularly care what you feature in the avatar, I just want to see your pretty avatars. XD It's not that it's a bad thing to separate them into categories, it'd just be helpful to have a "view all" option. But I understand that it's a lot of work, so I can see why someone wouldn't want to do it. Ehh.

I like your color palettes (particularly "Rain" and "Envy"), and my favorite layout is "Esthetique." The colors are really beautiful. :]
 
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post Jul 26 2008, 12:35 AM
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Ah yes, I might put have a view all avatar page then. And thanks :) I'm quite proud of the Esthetique layout.
 
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post Jul 26 2008, 01:34 AM
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QUOTE(ForgiveTheSinner @ Jul 25 2008, 10:35 PM) *
Ah yes, I might put have a view all avatar page then. And thanks :) I'm quite proud of the Esthetique layout.

You should be! :] All of your work, actually; the Esthetique layout just stands out extra-much to me.
 
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post Jul 26 2008, 11:44 AM
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Well I redid the organization of the links, is it better now?

I've yet to put a page of all the avatars up though.
 
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post Jul 26 2008, 06:09 PM
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Yayyyy, much more convenient for me. >]

By the way, it says to leave a message in the cbox, but there's no cbox. XD You might just want to write a terms of usage instead?
 
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post Jul 26 2008, 06:21 PM
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actually the tagboard is at the side of the navigation...I guess it's not really noticeable though so I'll move it.
 
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post Jul 26 2008, 06:22 PM
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OHHHH I see it now. You have to click on the link.

Then maybe you should just make the word "cbox" a link to the tagboard instead? It'd probably be easier.
 
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post Jul 26 2008, 06:26 PM
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lol I just finished doing that!
 

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