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 Jun 24 2004, 09:10 AM
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stubborn: I am prepared to be harshly critiqued so I am ready. I don't really want a rating out of ten but more of what you think where the error is and what I can do to fix it.
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Jun 24 2004, 09:33 AM
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 moderngirly  Group: Member Posts: 406 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 19,597 |
errors i see: the banner that u have is very nicely faded at the bottom but is harshly cut off at the top. i would try blending some of the top area to keep the image consistant. also the font and color that u use for the name of the version isn't used anywhere else and doesn't really fit in with ur color scheme. i would change it to a white or light red/orange and make it look like the way u did ur dates, again for consistency and so that title doesnt stick out so much. 1 laaast thing, haha. i don't think u noticed but on ur left module, the right and bottom borders are thinner than the rest of the borders in the entire blog. soo i would make them the same length as the other borders
 u asked to be critiqued haha. hope this helps!
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Jun 24 2004, 11:27 AM
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 Yeah, actually, those flaws I cannot fix because i don't know how to. for instance, the banner picture, the empty space above it was meant to be for the xanga ad but i moved it so now its an empty space. Also, the left mods, the trim/border format is like that, you can't fix it. i asked the person who did it.I really appriciate the suggestions |
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Jun 24 2004, 07:06 PM
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 No pictures, please. Group: Member Posts: 491 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,906 |
yeah, but all you gotta do it position your image so that it's up more. when it asks for margin-top, just put a negative number.
 The first blog header is sticking out a bit so perhaps make it shorter or move it to the left some more. Also, there is this long red line through one of your entries  and I really have no clue what that is. Oh yeah, one more thing  is this made on adobe photoshop? well if it is, you can edit the text so that the edges look more smooth instead of kinda... uhh I guess the word I would use is chunky or somewhat pixel-ish looking by making it crisp, strong, or sharp instead of normal.
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Jun 25 2004, 05:07 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,077 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,904 |
Only fault I see is that your image is kinda low. Like LiLmIsSvAnDy said, change your margin.
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Jun 30 2004, 04:35 PM
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 l 0 v e [4] e t e r n i t Y Group: Member Posts: 490 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,320 |
ur banner is nice yet simple
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Jun 30 2004, 04:46 PM
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 Natsumi is the XD Group: Member Posts: 915 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,203 |
I like the banner and the colors ^^~
err and the links. like at the left. ._. they seem blurry and yeaah a bit wrong looking 
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Jun 30 2004, 06:46 PM
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 Perfect_imperfections Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,822 |
i agree with natsumi on the links and on the dates. They look wrong with your layout. Also, try positioning your layout to the center more because the right side is too blank. But other than that, i love your banner! the colors look good! i like the fact that you moved your xanga ad, a lot of layouts get ruined because of that thing! GREAT JOB!
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Jul 1 2004, 09:46 AM
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 I will spin you to sugar. Group: Member Posts: 416 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,843 |
1. fonts match. good.
2. dates are horrible! they hurt my eyes, I feel like I need glasses 3. the effect on your sidebar text makes the text hard to read 4. cellpadding! you used it!  5. no invisible scrollbar! 6. why is ther so much space after "Next 5"? 7. I can't really tell, but maybe, so I'm just gonna say it. I'm apologize if I'm wrong here. but, there is a brush on your angel that looks like a grid. But it looks like instead of (in photoshop) using a brush, you might have had it on pencil and "brushed" it on. maybe? cuz it should be a bit softer, right? hope that helps. nicely done.
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Jul 1 2004, 04:49 PM
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 iGackt Fan! Group: Member Posts: 296 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,742 |
QUOTE(natsumi @ Jun 30 2004, 3:46 PM) I like the banner and the colors ^^~ err and the links. like at the left. ._. they seem blurry and yeaah a bit wrong looking I agree... the links look kinda grainy... I can see black speckles around the links... |
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Jul 1 2004, 04:55 PM
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CrzylilRckrChic Group: Member Posts: 105 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 23,012 |
awesome header
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Jul 1 2004, 05:14 PM
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l 0 v e [4] e t e r n i t Y Group: Member Posts: 490 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,320 |
isnt this in the xanga skins section?
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