Women's Anatomy, the ideas just keep comin! Options

[bigtrey90]

A very personal piece I created in about 2 hours on and off. I was aiming to improve my style of simple with a WOW factor. I was inspired by elements from artist work and add my twist too it. Tell me what you think. I believe I can add so much more too it, but just need verification I'm on the right track with composition and nothing seems out of place. By the way, if you have any advice to make the feet seem less flat, please tell me, lol.



UPDATED VERSION!



FINAL VERSION! (That I know of )

[Vaguememory]

Wow, this is really neat, its like really cool. I'm not good with it, I think its awsome though =]

[bigtrey90]

thanks!

[Vaguememory]

your welcome =D

[speakerboxx123]

you are very creative.
love your work
keep it up.

p.s.you should write tutorials.

[bigtrey90]

^ thanks for the compliment. really appreciate that!

i used to make tutorials for my website, but i'll keep that idea in mind.

[manny-the-dino]

this is pretty cool, i have to say. it's not your typical text book diagram of a woman's anatomy. the only thing that i think you can fix are the shape of her breasts; they sort of look likes pecs, tbh. & she doesn't have a neck, now that i think of it. haaha maybe you should add a neck so she looks human. lol


but this is good overall. great job!

[bigtrey90]

thanks for the feedback.

your right, this isn't the typical anatomy because it won't be. certain features are changed to my style.

[Smarmosaur]

i like the track you're on. but make her hips less obvious. like, instead of "chunky", make them "curvy". :]

[bigtrey90]

they aren't chunky, their wide, lol.

but i see what you mean.

[GunsNRachel]

I like it. The only thing I would change though is where her butt/hips go into her leg. You should smooth it out there instead of having the dent. It does make her look a little chunky.

[bijou]

The hips and breasts could be improved. Her shoulders have a strange posture as do her legs as though she's about to cross them or has to urinate badly.

Overall, I really like it. It's very creative and I like the use of color.

[vintage-toile]

this is a very interesting idea. you have pulled it off well. to make the feet less flat add some tiny curves into them to suggest toes?
overall a good job.

[GunsNRachel]

Lol the hearts in the wrong spot?

[bigtrey90]

^ lol i know the heart is in the wrong spot. i just have a habit of putting everything in the center. i guess i should make this seem more accurate and get out of this CENTERED anxiety.

thanks for all the feedback and suggestions.

[bigtrey90]

i updated my topic with an edited version. i moved the heart to the right place, lol, and changed the background.

i like how there is no neck, because......i just like it.

the feet, i don't even know where to begin to edit them, so any tips would be great. i smoothed out the hips as well.

[Melissa]

i updated my topic with an edited version. i moved the heart to the right place, lol, and changed the background.

hm. the heart should technically be on the right for us (since it's on her left). and it's actually closer to the middle than it is on the "left."

but i get that this isn't supposed to be completely anatomically correct. it's a good graphic, nonetheless.

[fixtatik]

the only thing that bugs me is the ying & yang on her stomach. why?

everything else i absolutely love. i even love that her heart is on the wrong side. seriously, if i had the money and you had a huge copy, i'd buy a print of it. you should sell it somewhere

[karmakiller]

I like the belly button in the first one better than the belly button in the second one. I really like the idea behind it and I think it looks awesome. You get an A+ on the wow factor. I think, though, that you could do her toes kinda like how you did her fingers, only a little more rounded. They seem a little jagged.

[datass]

honestly, it looks very awkward

[bigtrey90]

thanks for all the feedback and compliments. i keep all tips in mind.

i meant to say on the "right" side of the chest instead of place, lol. the ying yang as her belly button is supposed to represent peace.

awkward but different. i wasn't really thinking about making a print, but i'll keep that in mind later.

[fixtatik]

it doesn't really come across as being a peaceful theme. dripping grunge, a torn apart anatomy, and lines darting this way and that, almost saying "eat me here." thigh, roasted or baked?

//edit: though, now that i think about it, it's like a little bit of peace in a world of calamity.

[bigtrey90]

this is a very personal piece, so you probably won't understand why things are set up a certain way, etc.

[Melie]

you know i really really like this a lot! to me, it feels like it needs some type of text on some of those lines. but i really really like this!!

[markmejia]

I have to say I like this, and I like the colors you used. But I can't decide whether I like the first one or the updated one better.