Experiemting with Styles, Feedback would be appreciated Options

[bigtrey90]

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I have been working on this for the past 2 days. I am not finished with this piece yet, and I'm trying to avoid using stock photos besides the kanye picture and improve the piece with abstract art. I'm just trying to discover my personal style.



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[bigtrey90]

thanks alot. i know where your coming from. i don't know exactly how to feel about it. i'm trying to go to the next level.

[lovescream]

I think you're getting there, just needs a lot more. Also, IMO, the faded part is kinda eh.. I think you could design over it instead of making it fade, but it's still pretty nice.

Btw, I like that picture of Kanye. Rofl. Can I have the original link? xD I feel like making something with it now hahaha.

[markmejia]

I like how modern and clean it looks. I also love the orange and white.

[bigtrey90]

thanks for all the advice and feedback. i feel im getting there as well, just need to stop working on it for awhile and come back too it because it starts to look rushed because i just want to put something on here, lol.

here is the link, lol:

Kanye Picture

[emberfly]

I like EVERYTHING about it.. except the "sun" .. I thought it was an afro at first XD

[bigtrey90]

lol thanks.

[mizzkewl06]

the sun thingy on his head threw me off, but other than that it's looks good. & i love the color you used, so bright & fresh. great job!

[bigtrey90]

lol yeah the sun thing is just something i added to see if it goes somewhere.

thanks for all the feedback.

[emberfly]

^ you did an incredible job though :-) all your graphics look great

[lkajsfklajskds]

yea, i think this is great!

im not too worried about the sun. but i am a little iffy bout the blur. also, i wish it were bigger =[

[bigtrey90]

thanks for the compliments. that makes me more confident about my work.

the image i found wasn't that big to begin with, but i guess i need to step outside my comfort zone soon and make bigger pieces.

i have been working on this, and i changed it up a bit, so ill post the edited version soon.

[bigtrey90]

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[bigtrey90]

lmao.

i'm guessing thats a good thing.

i used my illustrator skills to spice it up. add a little wow factor; i hope i achieved that.

[vintage-toile]

bigtry90 - i admire the way how you really take all feedback into account, i think it was you who had the waterdroplet issue on the rhianna image as well? (i think :S) and you took all advice there.
once again you have listened to everyone and have had a very good outcome.
so well done.

and the oranges work really well here, sometimes orange is a very harsh colour but this has worked. well done.

[bigtrey90]

i truly appreciate that! i always try to take in advice from fellow artist because that's what inspires me to keep improving my skills and making others happy with my work. yeah i was the water droplet guy with the rihanna image lol.

thanks for the compliment and feedback.