my first submission Options

[hollywoodawaits]

Ok so can you guys rate my first submission? idk if it will be approved but rate it:

Reason for edit: I put the link in image format. :) - Cristy

[venti-anemoi]

I think this would work better in the Showcase forum.

It's a bit plain, and kind of messy-looking. It's hard for me to tell each separate image because it's greyscale (I dunno if that's what you were going for, but it kinda bugs me <_<). I like the way it's collaged, though, and it's really good image quality for a first submission (I still cringe when I remember mine).

Just wondering, do you know if it got accepted yet? *off to look*

//edit.

Yay, it did, congrats! :]

[hollywoodawaits]

Ok. Thanks!!! Hehe. I know. im happy. I aslo made a few icons i have 2 wait to get submitted. I like this site. :]

[Eww]

I like the images, but then it looks like all you did was cut out stuff, and paste it on.

Maybe try something different to make it stand out a bit more.
All the black and white makes it a bit boring, so think of something to do to spice it up, a bit.

Otherwise, I think it's pretty neat looking.
Who is he? :D

[hollywoodawaits]

Ok. hes some artist named Gary something. Ill go find the last name.

[aaayotiffany]

hmmmm. they look like just a bunch of cutouts put together. i agree with thefegnut about the black and white thing. try to incorporate more effects onto it to make it into a coooler banner.

[lkajsfklajskds]

i kinda dont now where to look. my eyes go everywhere!

congrats on the acceptance, though =]

[Insurmountable]

Its cluttered at first, and you can tell where the images started and stopped, and with collages its better to avoid that sometimes. I think some of the pictures should be erased so they aren't covering the guy.

[tailoredtrouble]

I think this would work better in the Showcase forum.

it's really good image quality for a first submission (I still cringe when I remember mine).

gahh me 2.
i still do when i look at some of my more recent ones
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i like this graphic.
i dont really know why; it just kinda seems different. & i like how its cluttered, it kinda adds to the mood or something
collaged good, too.

[michaelm]

what's that?

[hollywoodawaits]

gahh me 2.
i still do when i look at some of my more recent ones
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i like this graphic.
i dont really know why; it just kinda seems different. & i like how its cluttered, it kinda adds to the mood or something
collaged good, too.

Thanks!!! Me too. i like the randomness.

[hollywoodawaits]

Thanks :]

[tokyo-rose]

I agree with most of Zephyr's (dreamstar7) post. So many cutouts being in grayscale make the image look plain and difficult to pick a focus point out of. But it's not bad. Congrats on its acceptance.