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I need advice (=, I would love some honest opinions on this (=
ChewyProductions
post Apr 20 2008, 06:49 PM
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Any comments? advice? opinions? etc (=
 
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post Apr 20 2008, 07:37 PM
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I like it, but what are you planning on doing with it?
 
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post Apr 20 2008, 07:44 PM
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i really like how you blended the flower into this. it came out very nice. the text looks alright. are you going to keep this as a graphic?
 
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post Apr 20 2008, 08:32 PM
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i like it. _smile.gif
however, i'm a little iffy on the type of font you used.


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umm also, the texts are slanted at different angles. you're probably like wth but i'm such a perfectionist & little stuff like that bugs me on my graphics lol.
 
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post Apr 20 2008, 08:39 PM
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I'm using this as the background for a skinny layout.
I've never been good with fonts |x
any font suggestions?
 
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post Apr 20 2008, 08:41 PM
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Brankovic?
 
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post Apr 20 2008, 08:43 PM
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I just use Arial usually. Sometimes Century Gothic. Book Antiqua is my favorite serif font.

And if I use a downloaded font I use A theme for murder. But thats pretty rare.
 
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post Apr 20 2008, 08:54 PM
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Arial didn't turn out so well.
Where can I get Brankovic?
 
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post Apr 20 2008, 09:00 PM
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I clicked random fonts (=
this one is Brush Script
 
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post Apr 20 2008, 09:48 PM
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Not a big fan of the fonts either.But I think the graphic as a whole is nice.
Maybe, take out the "in the end love takes over" ?
 
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post Apr 20 2008, 09:58 PM
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Try placing the font somewhere else. Maybe like "In the end, Love takes over" As one sentence, not seperated like that. Take off the Gradient Outline or Change the angle of it. Try switching the Font color to a Grey or Black, with a white stroke of maybe 4? and a Dropped Shadow.. then create a new layer and apply an Air Brush(i call it that but its a default brush in the beginning and it should look like an air brushed brush..lol) and just apply it behind the text maybe making a zig zag or something. good luck.
 
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post Apr 20 2008, 10:53 PM
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QUOTE(Angeline @ Apr 20 2008, 09:33 PM) *
This is really cute. I actually really like the brushes.

Just, your name. The whole "Productions" thing has been done. Over and over and over x298347987298347 again. Change your name, seriously. O_O


yea i was thinking about getting rid of it.
Do you think people will understand or see the message?
Even now with the font, do you see the message?
 
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post Apr 20 2008, 11:05 PM
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quoted wrong person
I meant absinthe
 
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post Apr 21 2008, 05:42 AM
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i agree with changing the name.
but i really do like this, it took me a while to figure it out, but thats what i like about it.
but i agree the font does look a little out of place.
 
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post Apr 21 2008, 08:47 AM
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the blending is great. instead of a saying, why not try just one word?

great job!
 
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post Apr 21 2008, 05:50 PM
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It's sort of too late to change the name.
I know "productions" has been used so many times, but I think I'm going to just stick with it.
I tried the other suggestions (=
Here they are!





Which one do you prefer?
 
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post Apr 21 2008, 06:23 PM
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Personally I like the first one. I like how you used a different font from what I read was your normal (I download fonts like crazy). Also, I like how you expanded the words and dropshadowed them to make them look more 3-D.

But I do have to admit, the credit is too prominent. Try smoothing it over and fade it into the background. That or remove the productions and just use chewy (ie: for my graphics, I use CookieCake instead of CookieCakeLays which is the name of my layout site on xanga).
 

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