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 Apr 9 2008, 02:05 PM
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 Death is a promise given to us at birth  Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459  |
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Apr 9 2008, 02:12 PM
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 <(^_^<) DANCE!(>^_^)> Group: Official Member Posts: 1,304 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 586,621 |
ohhh, pretty. love the lyrics. i like the second one best... it looks more elegant to me. but both look nice. the only thing though, the colors on the border on the first one kind of don't mesh... but i like the flowers. other than that they're nicely done.
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Apr 9 2008, 03:36 PM
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 Resource Center Tyrant Group: Official Member Posts: 2,263 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,306 |
The first one is decent, too. You have implemented the brushes nicely, except the blue border is a little weird, and I think another backdrop would have worked better. Rather than using the same photo, in black and white, to set the photo off. I would've picked some paper texture that matches with the colors you've used on the color photo, because you have the notebook paper and everything in it already.
The second one is just all right to me. I'm not so sure about the sepia that you used for the foreground photo. . .the contrast isn't so good, and I think the sepia color throws everything off. I do enjoy the gradient you have used in the second one. How it has the spotlight effect on the words and then it grows increasingly darker; the lighting was well done. |
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Apr 9 2008, 04:34 PM
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 yo yo yiggidy yo. Group: Official Member Posts: 1,606 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,591 |
i like the first one better, just because its more simple. and its the designs around the photo is really nice. the lyrics are great, yeah, it fits the photo. nice pick. i also love the notepaper effect above the big photo. but there's some weird blue color effect at the botton on their arms in the big photo and its kind of off. but i definitely like it better than the second one.
i agree with misshygienic. the second one is nice, but i don't really like how you made the front photo sepia. it kind of bothers me a bit. |
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Apr 9 2008, 05:47 PM
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Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
thanks for the input. I love hearing it.
I guess the texture was not entirely black. Hence, the blue. And the second one, i was going for vintage. |
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Apr 9 2008, 05:48 PM
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 ٩(͡๏̯͡๏)۶ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,309 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,593 |
oh my god ryan. i want to have sex with the pictures. can i?
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Apr 9 2008, 05:59 PM
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 Kissing for yesterday. Group: Official Designer Posts: 465 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,813 |
the font in the first doesn't fit so well..and the brushses could have been blended better.
however, the second one is very lovely. i just feel there could be a little bit more to these images? |
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