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 Mar 21 2008, 03:38 AM
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 kthxbai  Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203  |
I decided this needed a bit of rain.
original: mine: I did this very quickly. I know there are some off places; I know. You don't have to tell me there are; I know. |
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Mar 21 2008, 04:08 AM
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 define our lives for us. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 11,656 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,293 |
I know you said not to tell you, but I'm gonna tell you anyway.. There are some places off. Maybe if you kinda worked on it more, there wouldn't be some off places? Ionno, but it is pretty good overall. I also kinda don't like how her face is wayy too dark, it's hard to see.
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Mar 21 2008, 04:11 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
We know you know, but I'm going to tell you anyway. Some of the rain spots are off.
I like it though. It's interesting how you turned the daylight almost into night just by grayscaling it. |
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Mar 21 2008, 06:28 AM
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 (′ ･ω･｀) Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
thing is
it looks like a strong storm, while the trees stay normal. i think if you cant make the trees look like they're swaying, stick to less strong wind. its a good try though. |
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Mar 21 2008, 01:18 PM
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kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
QUOTE(twilightsamurai @ Mar 21 2008, 04:08 AM)  I know you said not to tell you, but I'm gonna tell you anyway.. There are some places off. Maybe if you kinda worked on it more, there wouldn't be some off places? Ionno, but it is pretty good overall. I also kinda don't like how her face is wayy too dark, it's hard to see. oh my god. that's what I like about it. She's EMO! lol. |
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Mar 21 2008, 01:42 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
QUOTE(emberfly @ Mar 21 2008, 11:18 AM) oh my god. that's what I like about it. She's EMO! lol. A dark face doesn't necessarily suggest such emotion. There are better ways of expressing a sad emotion than simply darkening the face. Try to lighten her face up a bit, while leaving the appropriate parts of the face shaded. After all, she is the subject of the image. |
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Mar 22 2008, 01:21 AM
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 Napple Hunter Group: Member Posts: 100 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,472 |
Does rain really fall that fast?
Can fast be used as an adverb? |
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Mar 22 2008, 01:28 AM
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 Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,156 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 95,404 |
QUOTE(emberfly @ Mar 21 2008, 11:18 AM) oh my god. that's what I like about it. She's EMO! lol. In my opinion, she doesn't look emo at all. I think it would be nicer if her face is showing more. Other than that, her clothes and surroundings look nice. |
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Mar 22 2008, 01:31 AM
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 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
the rain is really cool but i would of liked it more had there been some more color and maybe some text
not like a cheesey quote but ya know |
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