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 Mar 19 2008, 11:16 PM
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 any comments?
advice? opinions? i want as much help as possible (= |
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Mar 19 2008, 11:19 PM
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 Resource Center Tyrant Group: Official Member Posts: 2,263 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,306 |
I'll do this in list-form, so the technical terms won't be an obstruction.
1.) Too much glow on "Dream." It's almost a distraction from the image, and pictures tell a lot more than huge text. 2.) The pixel font at the top is blurry and should be of higher quality and more crisp. 3.) I'm not feeling the image itself. I don't really know what you did to it other than adjust brightness/contrast levels and added some subtle background with "dream" all over it. |
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Mar 19 2008, 11:22 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643 |
QUOTE(MissHygienic @ Mar 19 2008, 11:19 PM)  I'll do this in list-form, so the technical terms won't be an obstruction. 1.) Too much glow on "Dream." It's almost a distraction from the image, and pictures tell a lot more than huge text. 2.) The pixel font at the top is blurry and should be of higher quality and more crisp. 3.) I'm not feeling the image itself. I don't really know what you did to it other than adjust brightness/contrast levels and added some subtle background with "dream" all over it. thanks! okay so lower the glow pixel should be more visible? um wow i didn't think you could see the dream all over it lol im gonna go edit this and if you're not too busy do you think you could give me more help? |
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Mar 19 2008, 11:26 PM
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 kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
I couldn't see the dream at all. I had to squint really hard just to see it a little bit.
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Mar 19 2008, 11:29 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643 |
 i didn't do much to it i lowered the glow and changed the opacity of the pixel to 100 i got rid of the "dreams" in the background i didn't like that much i really don't know what i should do with the picture does anyone have any advice on the picture itself? |
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Mar 19 2008, 11:42 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643 |
umm so i was just told to lower the glow
i guess i should make it larger but no as large as last time? i'm still in the whole myspace phase sorry!! wow i never thought of that idea of where to place it thanks i'll get rid of the bold text thanks for your help im gonna edit this and post it again |
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Mar 19 2008, 11:49 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643 |
 i hope thats better i got rid of the x's i got rid of the glow on the bar i made the font thinner i changed the position of my credits i moved "dream" so it's not touching the border ( i didn't realize how important that was until now (= ) |
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Mar 20 2008, 12:03 AM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643 |
thanks so much!!
i'll remember everything you told me when i make something else(= i love createblog! |
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Mar 20 2008, 02:09 PM
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kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
ah the last one is 1000 times better. The credit bugs me a bit, but maybe i'm being too picky.
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Mar 21 2008, 08:13 AM
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 Kissing for yesterday. Group: Official Designer Posts: 465 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,813 |
to be honest the image you've chosen doesn't fit so much with the word "DREAM", as the image isn't that dreamy.
its far too over-done with the editing. try pasting the original on top of the background, and changing opacity/lighting to see if you can get a nicer effect. |
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Mar 21 2008, 01:16 PM
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kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
^ I agree. Most images that say "dream" on them have nothing at all to do with DREAM... I guess girls just like that
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