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 Mar 18 2008, 03:31 PM
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Member  Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643  |
 could i make that better? it seems really empty... the font doesnt seem to fit either |
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Mar 18 2008, 03:35 PM
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 Melieized Group: Official Designer Posts: 1,372 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 478,715 |
don't like the outline of it. very sharp edges but other than that it's hot.
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Mar 18 2008, 03:36 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,028 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 579,129 |
What do I think of you?
I don't know you and you just joined cB yesterday o-o Edit: LOLOLOL. Wow I'm dumb :D |
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Mar 18 2008, 03:43 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643 |
thanks!!
i joined yesturday so i could get help i didn't think i'd get replies so fast yay! okay so my cutting needs major improvement get rid of the overlaying change the font of "who do you think i am" and move it (= thanks !! |
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Mar 18 2008, 03:53 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643 |
do you think this looks better? i added the extra white stroke so that it separates the black background and i got rid of the overlay
i changed the font of the "who do you think i am" i couldn't find a place to put it though... i tried to cut it neater  |
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Mar 18 2008, 04:04 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
Yes, it's definitely better than the first version. Don't make the line so thick where you cut yourself out. Make the edge smoother and thinner.
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Mar 18 2008, 04:06 PM
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 Kissing for yesterday. Group: Official Designer Posts: 465 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,813 |
it needs a lot of work
suggestions: scrap that background completely. its not working. start afresh. leave it for now. go onto the image youve got and try some blending mode styles, [right click layer select blending options] and adjust different things. improve the quality of the image and make the harsh lines flow a bit better. get rid of the "who do you think i am" text, this is kind of just placed there. maybe use a smaller darker font and just write it in the corner of the post it, really tiny. this adds depth to the image. then start on a background which works. don't use black, its too blocky. choose a different shade of black or pick colours from the image with the eyedropper :) good luck, if youve got anymore questions go for it. |
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Mar 18 2008, 04:06 PM
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Melieized Group: Official Designer Posts: 1,372 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 478,715 |
how about adding some hint of color in the back...to make the image standout?
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Mar 18 2008, 04:25 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643 |
 i worked harder on this one (= i still can't get the cutting right.. i'm not sure if the brushes are okay |
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Mar 18 2008, 04:33 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643 |
lol i've changed it sooo much
i think it improved thanks so muchh(= heres number 4 hehe  |
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Mar 18 2008, 04:35 PM
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Kissing for yesterday. Group: Official Designer Posts: 465 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,813 |
this is cute.
maybe adjust the opacity of the image very teenyly. so that you can see a hint of the background through or something. for some reason i think its too strong.. |
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Mar 18 2008, 04:46 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643 |
 less brushes i think its more organised and i lowered the opacity of the picture so you can see the background.. |
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Mar 18 2008, 04:48 PM
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Kissing for yesterday. Group: Official Designer Posts: 465 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,813 |
wow. good job :)
tweak the who do you think i am text a little, from personal opinion i think its too much in focus, where as the post it should be? thats just a personal idea though. other than that its a good job really, are you a beginner? if it is, congrats :D |
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Mar 18 2008, 04:49 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643 |
i've done this for a long time like 2 years..
but haven't really thought about it seriously until a couple of weeks ago thanks so much for your help (= |
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Mar 18 2008, 04:52 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 631,643 |
thankss <3
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Mar 18 2008, 06:08 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,288 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,380 |
QUOTE(Melie @ Mar 18 2008, 04:35 PM)  don't like the outline of it. very sharp edges but other than that it's hot. I don't like the positioning of the words either. But good!!  |
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Mar 18 2008, 11:46 PM
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 kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
I hate that you outlined the girl. It looks like a bad render of a girl from a black background. Sharp edges definitely ruin images, unless of course they're robots, then sharp edges would only make sense.
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