I, the glow, free written in gov. |
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 Jan 17 2008, 02:39 PM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
In the window of my time I dwell away as they abide they, the world and I, the glow to be alone, to never grow to never speak, sing or shine. While racing on, I still stood the island, my will is the wood around me rages the storm I frustrate for my persistences, again I state I'll be here till the break, I wait, for triumph's awesome feast They deem me: to be alone to never grow to never speak, sing, or shine. I simply glow and flicker in and out of light. |
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Jan 17 2008, 03:35 PM
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Fantastic writing - I love how you've put this together and I love the words 'I, the glow' - lovely.
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Jan 18 2008, 08:49 PM
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 That's what she said. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,559 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 130,200 |
Wow, I love how it just flows.
 Brava! I look forward to more of your poems. Glow...grow...
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Jan 18 2008, 08:50 PM
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Wow this is great, we should exchange poems someday.
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Jan 19 2008, 12:18 AM
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fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
it was like spur of the moment.
i get really bad writer's block, so i think this is the start of coming out of it. |
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