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 Dec 22 2007, 03:22 PM
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I made this picture a while ago when i had PSP X2 [which i will be getting back!]
I like it a lot, but i think i could of done better, it took about an hour and 45 minutes. PS. The signature at the bottom that says madfreek, was an accident, i was just trying to see how it would look, and then i accidently forgot to take it off before i saved it so yea  So uhh...tell me what you think!  [click to see it in detail] [attachment=15014:mycontestentry.jpg] |
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Dec 22 2007, 03:25 PM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
Moved to the showcase booth.
The quality doesn't look great at all neither does the text. I'd suggest making better font and image choices overall. The brushes and the style of your credit line kind of ruin it. *shrugs* |
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Dec 22 2007, 03:32 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,288 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,380 |
QUOTE(freeflow @ Dec 22 2007, 12:25 PM)  The quality doesn't look great at all neither does the text. I'd suggest making better font and image choices overall. The brushes and the style of your credit line kind of ruin it. *shrugs* Yea, the text was the hardest part for me. Im not very good on choosing fonts etc. The image i used was smaller than i intended it to be too. i also agree on how the brushes ruin it, it just doesnt go along with it. and it really didn't "blend". [is that the word i want?] Thanks for the feedback!
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Dec 22 2007, 03:36 PM
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 Resource Center Tyrant Group: Official Member Posts: 2,263 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,306 |
The shades of blue you chose clash together, and the text is extremely hard to read. The composition is really poor; I find that the best creations are ones with less words and more designs/artwork. In here, the hard-to-read words completely ambush the picture. The type of picture and font just don't work together, and the random paint splatter you put doesn't make sense to me.
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Dec 22 2007, 08:36 PM
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 im with the marching band Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
i like it but i dont like the font.
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Dec 22 2007, 10:21 PM
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 tell me more. Group: Official Member Posts: 2,798 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,640 |
i dont like the font, or the colors.
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Dec 22 2007, 10:30 PM
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 AKA RockIt Studios Group: Official Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 421,809 |
this is everything you shouldn't do.
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Dec 23 2007, 12:14 AM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
^ Let's be constructive
QUOTE(JuggaloSKfan @ Dec 22 2007, 12:32 PM) Yea, the text was the hardest part for me. Im not very good on choosing fonts etc. The image i used was smaller than i intended it to be too. i also agree on how the brushes ruin it, it just doesnt go along with it. and it really didn't "blend". [is that the word i want?] Thanks for the feedback! No worries. The more you pratice the better you get. I know what you mean about small images as well. The brushes I think look bad quality because they seem stretched out. Maybe if you used them smaller and just used it more in more colors it would turn out a little better. The brushes could work you just need different techniques on using them. The more banners you make the better you'll get |
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Dec 23 2007, 03:17 AM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,288 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,380 |
QUOTE(freeflow @ Dec 22 2007, 09:14 PM) Maybe if you used them smaller and just used it more in more colors it would turn out a little better. The brushes could work you just need different techniques on using them. Yea i see what you mean by the brushes seeming stretched out, when i get my PSP back im going to try the whole thing about smaller brushes, i never really thought about doing it like that. I just started using brushes, i usually just do like buttons and picture effects, so yea, im a little unexperienced in brushes. |
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