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 Nov 29 2007, 06:26 PM
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Newbie  Group: Member Posts: 8 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 592,112  |
So, I just finished a layout. Constructive criticism is much appreciated whether it be posted here or you im me on gtalk (chummy.monkey10). So the scans/stocks and psds are from Outspoken-Kate. The brushes are mostly from Moragh and the words in green are from the Rammstein Song: Wo Bist Du.
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Nov 29 2007, 10:04 PM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
The image quality is really low and should be better. The fonts are extremely hard to read and you should choose better choices as well. Focus on using colors that match.
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Nov 29 2007, 11:05 PM
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 Resource Center Tyrant Group: Official Member Posts: 2,263 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,306 |
Why turquoise font on a light gray background? On websites, that just never works out unless it's an image itself. It makes no sense to have a grungy title with pictures of a glamorous model in the background with paper/book textures. The photos themselves are lackluster; it's a dull gray that is not pleasing to the eye. I don't know if these were edited by you, but you should play with brightness and contrast. I feel as though you've lost the main theme/feel of your layout, overall.
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