writing a poem for english assignment pls read Options

[barbieeedollxo]

im writing a poem about myself it has to be in third person
so tell me does this sound ok so far?
and do you like it?


The funsized munckin is very petite
with a big appetite.
Sometimes she can be a ditzy blonde,
and often times is slow to respond
She's caring, sweet and loveable,
but if you make her mad she can be quite irritable
She's tough on the outside,
but not so tough on the inside.
She listens to her music loud
and sometimes she can feel very proud
She holds her feelings in
until she feels like she's about to break down
But you'll never really see her frown
She tends to wear her heart on her sleeve
and lack of order is her biggest pet peeve
She doesn't just open up to everybody
for she has been hurt too much to just trust anybody
She's had a rough past,
but she's made the ride a blast
She screams when she sees a spider for they are very scary
and she likes her pepsi with a hint of cherry
Her favorite animal is a monkey
and her outfits can be quite funky
She hopes to become a teacher for little
kids because they make her smile
And teaching them and playing with them
will make her day worth while
She loves to sing and dance
and hopes one day she'll find romance
She wants to learn to play guitar
and dreams of becoming a rockstar
She is very entergectic, and fun to be around
and her randomness could make her class clown
She can be quite silly, and sarcastic too
She can make anybody laugh, even you.