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rorhinna
post Oct 23 2007, 10:24 PM
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so my senior project for school is
the "big buddy, little buddy" program
which is taken from big brother big sister
and I made a flyer for it for school,
there will be more info on it than there
is, but could I get some feedback on it
and the logo in the bottom right corner.
I'm not sure I'm happy with it... so please
tell me what you think



or




I changed up the buddy words and the logo a bit, which is betteR?
more feedback please thumbsup.gif
 
karmakiller
post Oct 23 2007, 10:38 PM
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I like it. The Buddy's on the side look a bit odd, though.
 
brooklyneast05
post Oct 23 2007, 10:50 PM
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^agreed

i like the logo though
 
rorhinna
post Oct 23 2007, 11:15 PM
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ok, I changed the buddy thing and I modified the
logo, better?
 
Insurmountable
post Oct 23 2007, 11:23 PM
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I like the second one. The first one just wasn't pleasing to my eyes or something but once I saw the second right after it just looked perfect.
 
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post Oct 23 2007, 11:27 PM
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definitely second one
 
rorhinna
post Oct 23 2007, 11:32 PM
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ok cool,
anything else?
 
freeflow
post Oct 23 2007, 11:35 PM
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Second one is the best. The text for little buddy looks somewhat odd to me. Maybe because there is so much extra open space. I don't know second one is the one you should use.
 
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post Oct 24 2007, 12:46 AM
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Yeah, I like the 2nd one. I kind of like the stick figures on the bottom right corner, lol. It's very simple and nice.
 
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post Oct 27 2007, 11:44 AM
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the second one is the best... I like the font too
 
1angel3
post Oct 27 2007, 04:50 PM
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The second one is better but I would have rearrange differently or change the font for the information part to lessen the white space.
 

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