ever see the movie "carrie"?, a song about it Options

[ryfitaDF]

THEY’RE ALL GUNNA LAUGH AT YOU!
As innocent as kittens playing
Abrupt as gunshots in dead of night
A hemorrhage of unknown source
Through eyes blinded by christian light
Self indulgence with her fingers
Sliding through her virgin c***
Satisfying her libido
Triggering a rush of blood
All to witness: all her peers
Scoff at her cervical cut
Bombarding her with pads and tampons
Telling her to “plug it up”
This being the primary phase
Of vengeance supernatural
The ovulation of a maiden
The shower and the bucket full

A single nymph would grow to show
Some mercy for our heroine
As she recites the verses that
Were taught by mother’s guilt from sin
A knight in shining armor would
Ask cherry-bearer to the prom
While evil harvest hemoglobin
From a filthy, sordid hog
The couple was prince and princess
And turned out to be nominees
For high school history dynasty
And so were crowned the king and queen
But high above was lain a trap
By witch and her demonic count
Pull the string and pour life wine
And drown the naive maiden out!

And down the blood fell on out debutant bride
While onlookers laughed sewing their splitting sides
But the flower would stare in an unbreakable trance
They brought hell to her so she made hell of the dance
Systematically murder society wrong
As a swarm of rats on their way to the gone
“With my gift I give you your grave
I leave this f****** ball in flames!”

“they’re all gonna laugh at you!
They’re all gunna laugh at you!”
Mother warned you of you dirty pillows
Now dark civilization bellows
“they’re all gonna laugh at you!
They’re all gonna laugh at you!”
We can burn the dress together
And prey forgiveness from holy father

And so this tale of blood and death
And such improper use of god
And cruelty of society
Will live forever and ever long
Shiver, children, as you hear the
Story of bloodstained prom night
And as you grow you live in fear
The legacy of Carrie White

[*Kathleen*]

Haha I love that movie. Very descriptive. I like the words you used.

[shortie09]

i read the book; it was great. neat poem; i usually need a thesaurus to write one measley decent poem.

[iheartjohn]

Very descriptive. I love it, especially how you ended it.

[Nicolatofu]

That reminds me of that movie so much. It actually refreshes my memory about that movie. It was pretty freaky, but this matches it well.

[inthemudhole]

That reminds me of that movie so much. It actually refreshes my memory about that movie. It was pretty freaky, but this matches it well.

Same here.
Very vivid description.
I love it.
Wonderful job.

EDIT//

Just realized you wrote this in June of 2004. ;P

[ryfitaDF]

^ i know. kinda weird, i think. i saw the title and was, all, "hey, i wrote a song about Carrie, too." haha

thanks! good! this means even my old stuff is poppin fresh =]

[ItzOnlySydney]

i like it. =) your great at this writing stuff. i have a C in english so yea.lol

[RiddleMeWonders]

I love it. Very creative. It is a very valuable thing to be able to do something like this.


*Blows a kiss* MU_WAH!

Lindsey

[to-devastate]

Oooh. I haven't heard of it. yet; It's really good. It's very descriptive. Nice job