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 Aug 1 2007, 10:20 PM
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Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 54 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 544,170  |
This is like my 7th or 8th Div Profile, but it was the first time I made it up mostly of flash. It's for a company called "DeltaMedia" and I got the chance to design their profile. Anyways tell me what you think.
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fusea...9e-ac196993f504 Any comments? |
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Aug 1 2007, 10:46 PM
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 ;) Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
Very nice flash layout! The image rollovers look greally nice, along with the RSS.
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Aug 1 2007, 11:40 PM
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 Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
i didn't even notice the flash.
The font and the colors seem to look non-business like. |
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Aug 1 2007, 11:46 PM
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 I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
yea, i don't like the color
the roll overs are the best part |
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Aug 2 2007, 12:14 AM
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I think your logo could be alot better. To me, the fonts are really really unattractive. It would be alot better if the fonts were new and sleek, or something like Times new roman, or georgia, instead of Arial. Although, the hovers are really nice
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Aug 2 2007, 01:48 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 54 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 544,170 |
I see everyone likes the rollovers, and I'm glad because It took me about 4 days to get down the basics of actionscript.
As far as fonts, when reading long amounts of text, you really want to go with sans Serif fonts. It also helps to have sans serif fonts because I had to make the font size really small (2.8) and using a serif font would make readability much harder. QUOTE(moorepocket) The font and the colors seem to look non-business like. how so? |
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Aug 2 2007, 05:43 PM
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 What a hypocrite. Group: Member Posts: 2,754 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,150 |
I'm not really sure about the font, and the layout looks sort of plain, but overall 8/10. I like the organization of your layout though.
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Aug 2 2007, 07:51 PM
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 does the D.A.N.C.E. Group: Member Posts: 53 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 120,903 |
I don't like how the drop-shadow on the rollovers is in a different position. It seems less unified.
On the bottom portion you have (what appears to be) Arial as the body font, but on the top part, Tahoma is used. The same body font should be used throughout. Though you used the same title font throughout, that font is not professional- (or even good-) looking whatsoever. Personally, I think that should only be reserved for creating posters for shows decades ago. The RSS box is nifty, but doesn't flow with the rest of the layout. The logo has too many/too harsh of layer styles (bevel/inner glow/whatever). I don't think there's much of a problem with the colors. Maybe a deeper red/orange. Although the brownish gradient at the top doesn't match anything else. ..sorry for so much >____< |
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