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Jun 29 2007, 09:49 PM
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im with the marching band ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
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Jun 29 2007, 09:55 PM
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![]() sang loves hayden. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,373 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,687 |
It looks boring. -.-" All you did is just found a pic and just put it on the layout. And added the sections.
I don't like the links at all. Makes it look messy. You need to have that bg repeat too, since it's cut off at the bottom. Other then that... its okay.....? |
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Jun 29 2007, 09:57 PM
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![]() Naomi loves you. Y'all may call me NaNa ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,925 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 427,774 |
Where is the layout. The link works though
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Jun 29 2007, 10:21 PM
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im with the marching band ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
link is back up and i like the links
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Jun 29 2007, 10:28 PM
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![]() ;) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
It looks boring. -.-" All you did is just found a pic and just put it on the layout. And added the sections. I don't like the links at all. Makes it look messy. You need to have that bg repeat too, since it's cut off at the bottom. Other then that... its okay.....? I agree with everything you said. I think you can do better than this Anthony. You should definitely start over and add more to it. |
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Jun 29 2007, 10:36 PM
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im with the marching band ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
i know, it was a quick make.
what should i add? PM me and tell me what i should add to it to make it better. |
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Jun 29 2007, 11:23 PM
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![]() define our lives for us. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 11,656 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,293 |
add some more designs to the banner? or maybe fancy up the headers? IMO, the red is extremely bright and hurts my eyes. Try a bit of a darker shade. I think you can do better too. :]
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Jun 29 2007, 11:33 PM
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im with the marching band ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
what's IMO lol, *I'm slow* ... but that red is just default red on paint.
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Jun 29 2007, 11:36 PM
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![]() ;) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
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Jun 29 2007, 11:44 PM
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im with the marching band ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
okay lets stop spamming
i added new headers |
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Jun 29 2007, 11:48 PM
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![]() ;) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
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Jun 29 2007, 11:51 PM
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im with the marching band ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
alvin
if ill start over it will be tommorow... bed is calling. night. hope to see more suggestions/IMO'S |
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Jun 29 2007, 11:58 PM
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![]() sang loves hayden. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,373 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,687 |
Hmm.... It looks slightly different. Just changed the link colors, and title bars.
- I think you should make the navigation/sub-section width a lil bigger. It looks a lil too small for the sub-section and unbalanced. - I still hate those links but I guess you like them. - The title bars looks a lil odd, Its too big for such a small font size. - Umm, change the background? It doesn't match. I see like white lines going across the gray background and it seems a little odd because it didn't go with the main image. No continuation. |
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Jun 30 2007, 12:00 AM
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im with the marching band ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
theres a whit line?
QUOTE( B E D !!! ) bed is calling.
night. hope to see more suggestions/IMO'S |
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Jun 30 2007, 10:02 AM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 816 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 531,188 |
The red is waaaay too bright, and trying to read that black font is like hell for my eyes.
EYE HELL. Deff and darker color, or a grey...? |
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Jun 30 2007, 10:45 AM
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![]() d@niel ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,267 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,453 |
i guess ur workin on it right now 'cause i dont see nothin
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Jun 30 2007, 12:11 PM
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im with the marching band ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
^^ no im not working on it
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Jun 30 2007, 03:16 PM
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![]() Why don't you make like a hockey player, and get the puck ou ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Validating Posts: 167 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 434,037 |
I actually like the links. But yeah, for a quick one it's good, better than anything I can do... Because I can't code my layouts for crap :P
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Jun 30 2007, 04:42 PM
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![]() d@niel ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,267 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,453 |
It looks boring. -.-" All you did is just found a pic and just put it on the layout. And added the sections. I don't like the links at all. Makes it look messy. You need to have that bg repeat too, since it's cut off at the bottom. Other then that... its okay.....? yea, i finally saw it now...i agree, you need to add 'something' to it to make it unique |
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Jun 30 2007, 04:57 PM
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t-t-t-toyaaa ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
Safari - The layout doesn't work.
Firefox - Yay I can see it. The red is bright for some not to me personally. I would suggest making it black then you can add som red in the header etc. Earlier in the thread people said you found the header. If so you need to credit them instead of writing your name on it. Its actually not that bad so I don't see what all the fuss is about. Obviously the theme is skating you can fit that in somewhere. Maybe red text if you change the red background and put it torwards the bottom of the image. As I said if you didn't make it your credit needs to be off. Just code it into one of the sidebars. You also need to add the creators name either on top or coded on the side with yours. The link style isn't that bad. I personally think only navigation links look ok like that. The rest should and could be normal. You also could of lost the content boxes and just coded tables that might of looked better. |
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Jun 30 2007, 05:39 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,188 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 364,198 |
I'm sure everyone is trying to be sincere while still giving constructive criticism. I believe it looks "Beginner", a little too "Beginner" at that. Everyone has been through a phase where unbalanced content sections and bad quality headers were all the rage. Honestly, I think you should take Alvin's advice and start from scratch. It really looks messy and unprofessional to me, although you stated earlier that it was a "quick make". Plan ahead, trail and error coding, and mess around in photoshop - those are definite pluses to help on improving quality and overall design. A little thinking never hurt.
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Jun 30 2007, 06:26 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 86 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 179,570 |
Safari - The layout doesn't work. Firefox - Yay I can see it. The red is bright for some not to me personally. I would suggest making it black then you can add som red in the header etc. Earlier in the thread people said you found the header. If so you need to credit them instead of writing your name on it. Its actually not that bad so I don't see what all the fuss is about. Obviously the theme is skating you can fit that in somewhere. Maybe red text if you change the red background and put it torwards the bottom of the image. As I said if you didn't make it your credit needs to be off. Just code it into one of the sidebars. You also need to add the creators name either on top or coded on the side with yours. The link style isn't that bad. I personally think only navigation links look ok like that. The rest should and could be normal. You also could of lost the content boxes and just coded tables that might of looked better. I agree. I don't think it's too bad, especially considering it's done in paint. Looking at your source, you could try imbedding the image as the background for the div, setting the width and height to be the same as the image. Also, your font is appearing as default and black. The loading time is also slow, especially for the image. Try reducing the file size. Jpeg seriously isn't the end of the world. Or even just a lesser quality Png. And tables aren't all that bad. Frankly, I think it'd be fine if you cannot get the above method to work. An attribute you can add to either tables or divs is Z-index:#value here. The higher the numerical value is used on the table/div that you want to be on the front. For example, you'd have Z-index:1 for the div/table with your image, and Z-index:2 for your content. edit: Since you're using 2 sep. divs for your text/content areas, some of the above advice doesn't really apply. You can, however, make the red and black parts of the background an image and play with it in photoshop/paint. |
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Jun 30 2007, 07:11 PM
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![]() Naomi loves you. Y'all may call me NaNa ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,925 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 427,774 |
Well, the layout is ok. Try doing a blend of a singer/artist, instead of a brushes.
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Jul 1 2007, 07:13 PM
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im with the marching band ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
work on list
working on things that arent anything esle i should add to my work on list? |
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