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Member ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 23 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,834 ![]() |
I know that we may never be lovers again
Age will crawl into our lives Our friends will distance from us Til the time when we need someone to be there Loneliness is all that is left You'd probably think that it won't be my business anymore But if I don't care I'm afraid I'd lose you to life itself There are a lot of things to think about in this stage of life Slowly our friends are disappearing one by one Til there is no one left to say goodbye If we don't hold onto this friendship with all our hearts I won't be able to forgive myself later on You and I have been lovers once And I hope that we will again Even if that day never comes I want to be your angel at least Looking over your shoulders Til time takes us to a world beneath the soil note: lost my net for 2 days, this is a more recent piece~ |
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 42 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 538,136 ![]() |
i love her unconditionally
shes my angel for when i fall she is there for me in life she is there for me in death i couldnt forgive myself if i let go let go of her the one i love because she is that angel the angel that i love Ps i thought id try and do a response in poem!! urs is a very good poem and i do love your style of writing!! u have sum very interesting styles and it keeps u reading till the end. |
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![]() rissa. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 621 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 436,690 ![]() |
I only read what I felt like reading. It wasn't good nor was it bad. Romantic love poems... ehh...
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