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abstract landscape?, yeahh
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post Jun 19 2007, 06:22 PM
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So I tried using some of the same ideas from the last thing I did & mix it up a bit. Tried to make this one look like something, rather than a random blob. idk if it's really a "landscape" persay, but that's all I could think to call it at the moment. I used pens & sharpies instead of pencil haha. Though I did do this one on lined paper, I erased the lines in photoshop since no one else likes it like that laugh.gif But yeah....here it is. I haven't decided if I like this yet or not ermm.gif


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Okay, here's the original version, lines & all

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post Jun 19 2007, 07:07 PM
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I love the abstract to it, how you made it look like landscape is really cool, the sun is neat
 
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post Jun 19 2007, 07:37 PM
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I can't really see it as a landscape, because, well, there isn't much land to it. The focus is the tree / sun. If you made the land go on to the diminishing point, it would look more like a landscape. I like the idea, though. :)
 
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post Jun 19 2007, 08:08 PM
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Thanks. Yeah, idk if it's really a "landscape", but that's all I could think of to call it at the moment laugh.gif
 
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post Jun 19 2007, 10:16 PM
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I dont get the great feeling of "landscape"
 
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post Jun 19 2007, 10:20 PM
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Wow. That is great work! The sun is my favorite!
 
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post Jun 19 2007, 11:07 PM
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Lined paper gives it a sort of random quality. which can be good. I might have kept lines in, at least for the background, for one version just for that doodle feel. And also, the picture is sort of crooked, or at least appears so by the bottom right corner. Adjusting that in some way might make it look better.
 
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Thanks :]

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Lined paper gives it a sort of random quality. which can be good. I might have kept lines in, at least for the background, for one version just for that doodle feel.

Hm...okay. I added the orginal, unedited, lines included version. :D

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And also, the picture is sort of crooked, or at least appears so by the bottom right corner. Adjusting that in some way might make it look better.

Oh crap...I didn't notice that! That's where the page corner curled a bit when I scanned it in...I'll have to fix that. Thanks for pointing it out. **edit: fixed
 

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