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| *IVIike* |
 May 31 2007, 08:30 PM
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So in my Honors History class we had to do a project on someone in US History who made a change in the world. I decided to make an informational website. Personally i don't think it's great (but my teacher is old so she won't know) So just give me some feedback on it i have to present it on Monday
 http://www.freewebs.com/andrew-carnegie/index.htm |
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May 31 2007, 09:17 PM
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 ;)  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
IMO, I think it's perfect. I love Andrew Carnegie, he was filthy rich, haha, and Scottish.
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Jun 1 2007, 02:18 AM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
Ah, I love it!
It's really awesome. I don't think I'd change anything about it, really.  I love the font/color you used for Andrew Carnegie. 
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| *IVIike* |
Jun 1 2007, 08:30 AM
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ok thank you everyone!!
edit: i added the bibliography 
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Jun 2 2007, 04:27 PM
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aww mike i love it it looks great
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Jun 3 2007, 06:19 AM
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 d@niel Group: Member Posts: 1,267 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,453 |
cool idea...i might try that sometime
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Jun 3 2007, 07:16 AM
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 So um yeah Group: Official Designer Posts: 745 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 459,873 |
It will get ya an A :)
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Jun 3 2007, 10:01 AM
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te quiero Group: Banned Posts: 472 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 467,840 |
The design and everything is fine for a school project, but you might want to touch up a little of your grammar in the actual content part.
Oh, also... the famous quotes section in the biography page should probably move a little slower so it's easier to read. I think that's about it. Nice job. |
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Jun 3 2007, 12:58 PM
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 stop staring >_> Group: Member Posts: 497 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 455,389 |
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Jun 4 2007, 07:59 PM
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 Peggy. Group: Member Posts: 2,508 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 214,025 |
QUOTE(x.d.o.0.f.u.s @ Jun 3 2007, 10:58 AM)  Heyy! Yours isn't bad either! Anyways, I like both of them. I'll give you both an A if I am your teacher. |
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| *IVIike* |
Jun 5 2007, 08:35 AM
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yesssss i need an A
 it's due tomarrow
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Jun 5 2007, 09:48 AM
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 hardxcore. Group: Member Posts: 1,223 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 479,494 |
good luck then. it's good so no worries.
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Jun 5 2007, 12:12 PM
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 Oh Wow ... Group: Official Designer Posts: 688 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 468,522 |
Dang that's really cool, what I love about it as the banner (not the one on the top) the one where it has the title of the text to follow. It's really creative and you can tell you put a lot of effort into it.
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Jun 7 2007, 08:27 AM
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ok i presented it yesterday and i choked
 i couln't remeber someones name and i paused for like 15 sec. she said i was going to get a good grade though  well thanks everyone more feedback is still welcomed
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Jun 7 2007, 03:21 PM
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 im with the marching band Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
i saw the page a couple of nights ago and since it was the day after the due date, i didnt say anything...but i really like it...who would've known your computer skills would pay off in school
 -anthony 
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