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Oh, anorexic
wishforhelsinki
post May 29 2007, 10:39 PM
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Curses through bones and harrowing deception,
Oh, woe is me. Oh, woe is me.
Woe has not yet become I.
Dirty liquid and teaspoons half-full,
You are so much better than this.
I understood but I never could believe.
Underestimated guesses and fictitious solutions,
Joy is promised, regardless of its truth.
Ears stung and recoiling,
WHORE SLUT SKANK.
But if anything, I will never find peace in rest.


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RiddleMeWonders
post Jun 5 2007, 01:17 AM
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the images that came to mind because of this, combined with the inner thought or flashback of taunting thoughts of others, whatever they be, "WHORE SLUT SKANK".. very effective.

this was good.
 

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