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 May 28 2007, 11:58 PM
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 High Voltage!∞  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157  |
So, I got bored and decided to make something in photoshop.
 I plan on attempting to submitt layouts to CB again, sooo I decided to brush up and make my own style [that I have yet to make  ]Anyways, Erhm, so I made this:  I don't really like the title, though: Relax. Couldn't decide on a better or more suitable one. any suggestions?  Erhm, so C&C, please. 
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May 29 2007, 12:49 AM
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 ;) Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
It looks pretty good, and I like the pictures that you chose to use but I just don't like the font. I think you should choose a more elegant font for this graphic.
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May 29 2007, 01:04 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
I'm going to critique it as though it was in the queue:
1. The font is pixelated. I know it's supposed to look distorted but your font settings made it pixelated. 2. It's not really a good size... For a layout you want it to be longer, well, width wize, not necessarily length. With that picture you could probably make a really skinny layout, which isn't bad, but it leaves a lot of blank space which can become a dominating factor within a layout on a site. But it really is pretty. Love the pictures and the effects that the textures did. :D I'm sorry if I sounded too critique-y, but, I just figured ill give you a heads up now. |
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May 29 2007, 01:25 PM
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 So um yeah Group: Official Designer Posts: 745 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 459,873 |
QUOTE(oh_flardnarf @ May 29 2007, 02:04 PM)  2. It's not really a good size... For a layout you want it to be longer, well, width wize, not necessarily length. With that picture you could probably make a really skinny layout, which isn't bad, but it leaves a lot of blank space which can become a dominating factor within a layout on a site. It could be a banner. I think it needs a little bit more blending where the 2 images meet, and the splatter in the bottom corner looks a little weird. But it's really pretty, looking forward to seeing your submissions in the layouts
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May 29 2007, 01:27 PM
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show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
Yes, I realize that it could be a banner. That was what I was insinuating. But it's small. It would create a skinny layout. And about now i'm starting to repeat myself.
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May 29 2007, 01:45 PM
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So um yeah Group: Official Designer Posts: 745 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 459,873 |
LOL It didn't sound that way but it's ok. I just meant if someone used the default it would be a cute banner... I misunderstood.
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May 29 2007, 01:50 PM
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 hardxcore. Group: Member Posts: 1,223 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 479,494 |
i love the images that you used, as well as the textures. however, the font doesn't really fit and the left chick's knee looks odd. other than that though, it'sgreat. i love the color.
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May 30 2007, 09:42 PM
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i would make it bigger. Other then that i really like it, and I can;t wait to see new stuff from you
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May 30 2007, 11:18 PM
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High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
Thanks everyone. My laptop restarted before I could save the psd. -.-, so I can't edit it anymore. I was hoping on editing it after I got feedback, but now I can't.
And about the size, I wasn't planning on using it in a layout. I just needed to brush up. 
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