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Phil2thejay
post May 12 2007, 04:26 PM
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QUOTE(Gypsy Eyes @ May 12 2007, 5:08 PM) *
Alright, here's my critique.

br34ker4lyfe - You have a beautiful rich tone to your voice! Be careful not to sing through your nose, especially on words like who. Think of blowing out a candle, that's what your mouth should look like on words like who and you. With some proper vocal training you could really get somewhere! Keep it up!

I get that alot. Thanks for the tip, I'll keep that in mind if I make next round.

Anastatia:
You have a great voice but the choice of the song was kinda eh.
Try selecting a slow song. You vocals would shine more =P

Danielle:
It was very good just certain parts you were off tune.

Jane:
Very good also but you missed some of the high notes.
And it sounded like you sang through your nose most of the song.
Tone was good though.
Part 2 Sounded much better than part 1.

Jelyn:
You sounded good =]
I think you need a mic though =P
(Talk to you at the party tomarrow =P)
 
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post May 12 2007, 06:52 PM
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no one critiqued me.. cry.gif
 
dreamerOi
post May 12 2007, 07:56 PM
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post May 12 2007, 10:04 PM
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The judges will have critiques posted for each contestant, so everyone will get at least three opinions. =]
 
Phil2thejay
post May 12 2007, 10:07 PM
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QUOTE(dreamerOi @ May 12 2007, 8:56 PM) *
Ah me as well me as well. wacko.gif

When you sing, extend some of the words.
It seemed like to sped up the tempo of the actual song.
(EDIT:Yeah, you sped the tempo of the song in the begining, I compared it to the actual song )
Also you sang at the same note most of the time.
Kind sang some notes high when they shouldnt and some low when they shouldn't.
You have the potential, just need to work on it^^
 
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post May 12 2007, 10:08 PM
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Jane- Ah don't push the pop voice. It sounds like you're singing through your nose and with small mouth. Drop your chin and jaw down for vowels. Keep your mouth open and don't push the sounds. It will come naturally with practice.

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Jane:
Very good also but you missed some of the high notes.
And it sounded like you sang through your nose most of the song.
Tone was good though.
Part 2 Sounded much better than part 1.
Thanks for the critique, guys. I'll be sure to work on that "singing through the nose" thing. _smile.gif
 
dreamerOi
post May 13 2007, 01:03 AM
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QUOTE(br3aker4lyfe @ May 12 2007, 8:07 PM) *
When you sing, extend some of the words.
It seemed like to sped up the tempo of the actual song.
(EDIT:Yeah, you sped the tempo of the song in the begining, I compared it to the actual song )
Also you sang at the same note most of the time.
Kind sang some notes high when they shouldnt and some low when they shouldn't.
You have the potential, just need to work on it^^

Thanks so much for the help. I will do my best to extend the words ^^. I wasn't sure what song to sing and I ended up picking this. If you think there is a different song that would be better suited for me it'd be great if you could tell me. Thanks so much again. _smile.gif
 
Phil2thejay
post May 13 2007, 07:42 AM
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QUOTE(capricorn826 @ May 11 2007, 5:46 PM) *
clicky
embarassing...
Maybe I'll change it. blush.gif
Felt in a christmasy mood

Please dont forget her entry~
Considering I dont see it on the first page.
Looks like she got neglected on the 3rd page xD
So add her when u get teh chance =]
 
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post May 13 2007, 11:25 AM
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QUOTE(cup noodles @ May 12 2007, 7:52 PM) *
no one critiqued me.. cry.gif

QUOTE(dreamerOi @ May 12 2007, 8:56 PM) *
Ah me as well me as well. wacko.gif

sorry my computer wasn't loading any of yours wacko.gif
 
iDecay
post May 13 2007, 11:28 AM
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I'm sure AC or Dani will add it up later, PJ. I can't. D:

You can't, Jackie? wacko.gif Maybe try a different browser or maybe you're missing flash.
 
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post May 14 2007, 01:15 AM
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Dangit, too late.
Um, do you know when CB3 might start? _smile.gif
 
Phil2thejay
post May 14 2007, 05:45 AM
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QUOTE(The Markster @ May 14 2007, 2:15 AM) *
Dangit, too late.
Um, do you know when CB3 might start? _smile.gif

When ever CB 2 Idol Ends? Probably a little after a month at the rate this is going.
 
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post May 14 2007, 09:34 AM
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You're not late. _smile.gif

And for the record, cBI, like CBNTM is a long process. And I mean LONG. Last one started mid summer..
 
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post May 14 2007, 10:04 AM
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QUOTE(br3aker4lyfe @ May 2 2007, 2:38 AM) *
Hmm yeah
me
Philjay (Br3aker4lyfe)

Where Is She - J. Roman ft. Solouna OR by Natalie.

my recording
just for fun. right guys? =D
woot first guy!


That was sweet and yeah you got guts _smile.gif


QUOTE(Arjuna Capulong @ May 2 2007, 10:56 PM) *
This guy has no balls.

Heh you're funny :P

Maggie's my fave one so far :]
 
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post May 14 2007, 07:47 PM
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QUOTE(br3aker4lyfe @ May 13 2007, 8:42 AM) *
Please dont forget her entry~
Considering I dont see it on the first page.
Looks like she got neglected on the 3rd page xD
So add her when u get teh chance =]

Thanks that's ok. I'm too late. no one critique me if I'm in _unsure.gif
 
clarity
post May 17 2007, 11:36 AM
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QUOTE(br3aker4lyfe @ May 12 2007, 5:26 PM) *
Anastatia:
You have a great voice but the choice of the song was kinda eh.
Try selecting a slow song. You vocals would shine more =P

Hm, name a song and I'll try singing it.


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QUOTE(Gypsy Eyes @ May 12 2007, 5:08 PM) *
Anastasia- Ah don't make excuses ever! If you say something like that at an audition they'll ask you to leave right there. Watch words like you, truth and who. It sounds like you're saying ew. Drop your jaw to make it an ooo. Nice range though! At the end I can't understand a word you're saying. For future reference, when singing a capella never wait for where the music would be.

You do realize I'm already a signed artist?














Lol just kidding. :)
Capella?
 
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post May 17 2007, 09:12 PM
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a capella means without music.
 
clarity
post May 17 2007, 11:21 PM
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Gah, for some reason I got it mixed up with Gospel.

>_<
 
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post May 22 2007, 05:49 AM
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soooo
whens round 2 going. lol
 
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post May 28 2007, 06:54 PM
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pinch.gif Tell me about it. Are we still waiting on submissions?
 
Phil2thejay
post May 28 2007, 07:57 PM
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QUOTE(JoanOfArc @ May 28 2007, 07:54 PM) *
pinch.gif Tell me about it. Are we still waiting on submissions?

I beleive Dani just hasn't been on lately. I hope. lol
Arjuna? tina? whats the stats
 
clarity
post May 28 2007, 08:06 PM
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For real. This is like dead. _unsure.gif
 
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post May 28 2007, 08:11 PM
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Heh, so sorry you guys. We still need to discuss among ourselves, and we haven't really gotten a chance to do that recently.

You can't can expect this to get poppin' by summer break, though. cool.gif
 
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post May 28 2007, 10:19 PM
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QUOTE(Arjuna Capulong @ May 28 2007, 06:11 PM) *
You can't expect this to get poppin' by summer break, though. cool.gif
Can or can't? :\
 
clarity
post May 28 2007, 10:23 PM
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Well I think I should withdraw, since I'm probably going to be gone for a month.
 

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