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Unfinish vexel
xtrancie
post Mar 22 2007, 08:47 PM
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Okay, i like to get advice and yea just look at it and tell me what to improove, because i hate to finish it then go back and fix it LOL, so i rather do it during the process

This is Jessica Alba (my role model) >D

 
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post Mar 22 2007, 08:49 PM
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That's pretty good! I love the smooth style. The only thing that sticks out to me is the highlight on the right cheek. The top layer it too light.

Other than that it looks great so far.
 
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post Mar 22 2007, 09:05 PM
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QUOTE(Gypsy Eyes @ Mar 22 2007, 8:49 PM) *
That's pretty good! I love the smooth style. The only thing that sticks out to me is the highlight on the right cheek. The top layer it too light.

Other than that it looks great so far.


Alrighty
To do list :
1. lower opacity of right cheek high light x]
 
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post Mar 22 2007, 09:44 PM
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That's a great start. Not great, it's freaking awesome. But I think the left and right sides of her face clash in terms of color. But of course, it isn't finished yet so do your thing. :)

If you're having trouble with choosing colors, try desaturating it temporarily to see if there is a huge difference in tone.
 
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post Mar 22 2007, 09:50 PM
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QUOTE(mona lisa @ Mar 22 2007, 9:44 PM) *
That's a great start. Not great, it's freaking awesome. But I think the left and right sides of her face clash in terms of color. But of course, it isn't finished yet so do your thing. :)

If you're having trouble with choosing colors, try desaturating it temporarily to see if there is a huge difference in tone.


yea i noticed that too but like. the left side of her face have like a bright ass light, then the right side is like soo dim it's like a shadow kinda. im not gonna leave it as that color though once im finish, i think imma mystify the color once im done with the vector. >_< im feelin the laziness running through me again lol
 
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post Mar 23 2007, 04:26 PM
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Lookin good so far, I hope to be as good as you one day.
 
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post Mar 23 2007, 05:39 PM
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Looks good to me.
 
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post Mar 24 2007, 10:41 AM
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beautiful, smooth shapes
can't wait for you to finish
 
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post Mar 24 2007, 04:02 PM
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Like how it's smooth and the eyes are awesomeeeee, keep going.
 
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post Mar 24 2007, 06:07 PM
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The eye looks great! Please don't leave the eyebrow as one shape though, add some texture to it.
 
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post Mar 24 2007, 06:09 PM
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Yes, like Jackie said, Change the eyebrow some, add little hairs and such.
But man.. The eye looks great (esp. the eyeshadow), and I really like the skin.
It looks great so far. thumbsup.gif
 
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post Mar 25 2007, 11:54 AM
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thumbsup.gif this is wonderful, i read of everyone else's comments and they took the feedback out of my mouth lol. Can't wait to see the final product
 
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post Mar 25 2007, 02:32 PM
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Wow, this looks really really really good so far, the only thing I have a problem with is the eyebrow.. don't forget, eyebrows aren't a block of color. Also, the highlights on the cheek and nose are a little too bright - it makes her look like plastic! thumbsup.gif Great start.
 
xtrancie
post Mar 25 2007, 03:18 PM
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Lol yea the eyebrow, i usually do it like that first for the base then add little piece of hair over it x]
 

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