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Rihanna Vexel/Vector |
Mar 21 2007, 05:48 PM
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![]() talent on another level ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
Here is a little of the vexel/vector I did in photoshop. tips, advice, anything needed. it's my first vexel/vector: original image
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Mar 21 2007, 07:19 PM
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t-t-t-toyaaa ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
I'm no expert but I think that you can use more layers. Also people have told me this and I will tell you as well (just to help) you should try not to follow the posterization so much in the face. The colors seem a little odd (eyes really). Otherwise its an ok start. I can't really give good tips because I'm a struggling person trying to learn.
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Mar 21 2007, 08:10 PM
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Just another kid... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 600 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 505,690 |
I don't want to be a bitch... I really don't but I have to be honest with you or you'll never get better. So here it is. I don't like this image at all, I don't like how her eyes stand out from the rest, an dhow the shirt looks like it was done in microsoft paint. The vector looks like a layer, and noty a real one. I''m sorry but I gotta help you learn
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| *Kathleen* |
Mar 21 2007, 08:38 PM
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Yeah, just as Toya said.. I'm not an expert, but I think more layers (as aforementioned) would help. Also, definitely more work on the eyes is needed -- if her eyes are the focus here, you ought to spend more time/detail with them. Her hair looks a little off.. as well as the background.
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| *StanleyThePanda* |
Mar 22 2007, 12:10 AM
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The eye color was a bad choice. But as for everything else, it looks pretty good for a first.
The skin shading looks kind of neat to me (just the face), and idk why. It could be better, but it just looks.... gosh, idk, unique-ish... You have a lot of potential, just keep practicing. Also, Check out Vexels.net for tutorials, help, and even inspiration. |
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Mar 22 2007, 04:55 AM
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![]() talent on another level ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
haha. thanks for the critism, this is exactly what I asked for, and don't feel like your mean, it's the truth. plus the hair is the original image cause I really only did the face. I plan on working alot more on the eyes cause they do look bad. Toya and Kathleen, I will add more layers. THANK YOU!
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Mar 22 2007, 05:42 AM
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![]() stop staring >_> ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 497 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 455,389 |
I don't want to be a bitch... I really don't but I have to be honest with you or you'll never get better. So here it is. I don't like this image at all, I don't like how her eyes stand out from the rest, an dhow the shirt looks like it was done in microsoft paint. The vector looks like a layer, and noty a real one. I''m sorry but I gotta help you learn LOL oh wow XD Okay, more layers of shading and trasition, and use OPACITY. you need to master the pen tool O_O, the eyes color need to be more soften and more "gradient". right now the vector look VERY choppy. you didnt do the hair yet so i cant really criticize the hair x] but your neck is HORRIBLE. |
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Mar 22 2007, 09:41 AM
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![]() talent on another level ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
yeah I rushed on the neck for some reasons and yeah I havent really been practicing with the pen tool as well as I could. But Selvy, you did sound like mean which is good when it comes to this, but watch how you say things.
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